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In a word, only by working together can we solve the problems and give students a better environment to grow up and study in.() 。 殘缺句 ? So what is the cause make them feel so down? ? So what is the cause that makes them feel so down (anxious)? ? There are three main causes lead to the problem. First the pressure from endless homework which may exhaust them out ? ? There are three main causes leading to the problem. The first is the pressure from endless homework, which may exhaust them / wear (tire) them out. 7) 懸垂修飾語 : 錯用非謂語等形式,和主語不能構成邏輯關系 ? In order to reduce the anxieties, here are some solutions.? In order to reduce the anxieties, I propose/ put forward/ suggest some solutions. 8) 接排句 (句子之間沒有標點符號和句間連接詞或用逗號連接): ? Some of them are worried about their study, they are afraid of failing in the examination.? Some of them are worried about their study and (they are) afraid of failing in the examination. Some of them are worried about their study. They are afraid of failing in the examination. 內容要點 de不同方式表達 1. 焦慮 現(xiàn)象 ? 范文: Some cannot eat or sleep well and fail to concentrate on their studies. Some are afraid of taking exams and others even lose hope for their future life. ? 其它: ? Some worry about the failure of a test (?their failure to pass the exam/ examination failure /failure in the examination). If they don’t perform well in a test, they may lose their appetite or can’t sleep well in (the) night (或 at night) . ? Some seem to fet everything when they are taking an exam. ? 其它: ? Some are troubled by the gaps between their parents and themselves, leading to the arguments in their daily life. ? Some are troubled by a bad mood, leading to the arguments in their daily life. ? Some students are so worried that they couldn39。 問題與錯誤 1. 審題問題: 此點重點在于寫 phenom