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【正文】 候玩槍的經(jīng)歷，準(zhǔn)確使用了時(shí)態(tài)。A（n） _________ I have__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A（n） toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then. When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!【解析】寫作分析：這篇作文需要就自己最喜歡的物品展開描述，要求是進(jìn)行描述，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿模约八嬖诘囊饬x。要求：1. 請(qǐng)?jiān)陬}目空白處填上你心愛(ài)物品的名字；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。最后可以用說(shuō)理的方式來(lái)介紹做作業(yè)的必要性，例如用到了improve our skills提高我們的技能，在這里也有一點(diǎn)亮點(diǎn)，就是說(shuō)作業(yè)也要有變化性，要豐富多彩，體現(xiàn)了作者的深度思考，總體來(lái)說(shuō)出色地完成了既定的寫作任務(wù)。其次，開始具體陳述觀點(diǎn)，陳述的時(shí)候要適當(dāng)使用實(shí)例，相關(guān)用到的短語(yǔ)有have some difficulties in doing在做…的時(shí)候有困難，review the knowledge復(fù)習(xí)知識(shí)，think over the difficulties來(lái)回思考難點(diǎn)，Little by little一點(diǎn)一點(diǎn)地。寫作過(guò)程中要注意邏輯準(zhǔn)確，注意正確使用連詞，借助實(shí)例、實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)來(lái)佐證自己的觀點(diǎn)。s all. Thanks.【解析】寫作分析：審題之后能明白寫作任務(wù)是要寫出一篇小論文，討論每日的作業(yè)到底是不是必要的。s necessary for us to do daily homework.Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”．In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn39?！敬鸢浮緿ear students，I39。YesNoHelp us understand what we have learned；Practice makes prefect；...Take up too much time；Make us less interested in studying；...Your opinion：要求：1．80詞以上。一直以來(lái)，同學(xué)們對(duì)作業(yè)持有不同的觀點(diǎn)。除此之外，中間也使用了一些連接詞，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通順?！军c(diǎn)睛】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，符合邏輯，先表明自己觀點(diǎn)，然后闡述事情，提出自己的觀點(diǎn)和建議。然后仔細(xì)闡述了事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過(guò)。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，在寫作過(guò)程中，注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)，先寫出大明和玲玲之間的事情，然后再說(shuō)自己對(duì)此的看法。注意：詞數(shù)80—100；行文連貫，邏輯合理；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名； 文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。因此，Lingling很生氣，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。而你的朋友Daming最近卻被誠(chéng)信危機(jī)所困擾。此處because of， in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。Your opinionnecessary or unnecessaryYour reasonsthe root （根） of Chinese culture, know more about,spread, developYour suggestion…Dear editor,As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid
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