【正文】 包括的要點有：；，至少要寫兩條原因；，要有細節(jié)，說出時間、地點、人物以及具體發(fā)生的事件?；仡欉^去，我們一定想特別感謝某人，或者有些我們感到特別遺憾的事情，或者是一些令人難忘的時刻。11．（句子結構以簡單句為主，也使用了一些并列句和復合句，長短句結合，使文章富有節(jié)奏。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，作者根據(jù)表達需要使用了一般過去時、一般將來時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài)，動詞形式變化準確，語法規(guī)范?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者根據(jù)題目要求介紹了自己家鄉(xiāng)治理霧霾的情況，并結合自身的實際情況，講述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。寫作時，應注意英語句式表達習慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，應從句子的整體考慮，寫完整的句子，利用簡單句的基本句型，使用恰當?shù)脑~匯和短語。因此文章應主要分成三段，一個內容一段。題目中列出了三個要點，我們應根據(jù)這些要點提示，來組織語言，充實內容。參考詞匯：霧霾haze注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；2. 語言通順，句子連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3. 詞數(shù)80左右，信件的開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。請你按照以下提示給他回一封。10．（語言得體，語法規(guī)范，句式結構以簡單句為主，也使用了時間狀語從句、并列句、非謂語動詞等復雜句式結構。結構清晰，安排合理。短文有如下幾個特點：首先短文內容完整、充實，敘述具體，詳細，作者描寫了自己做飯給媽媽慶祝生日這件事，符合題目要求。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，以使文意連貫。為提升作文檔次，穿插使用并列句或復合句，如賓語從句、狀語從句等。短文應由開頭、主體和結尾三部分組成，開頭引出話題；第二部分為中心，具體描述事情的過程；最后一部分簡要描寫一下自己的感受。作文是開放式的，題目中只給了主題，具體的寫作內容，需要學生們自己發(fā)揮想象力去補充。要求:?！蔽覀兇蠖鄶?shù)人雖然微不足道,但也能有所作為。9．（修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關鍵。構思提綱。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。根據(jù)要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。要求：1. 思路清晰，觀點明確，語法正確，有說服力；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；3. 80詞左右。因此，人們常說“幫助別人就是幫助自己”。8．（寫作時，避免漢語式英語。時態(tài)為一般過去時，靈活運用動詞的過去式。【答案】Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，主要介紹中國的經典故事, “程門立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。內容提示：1. 楊時去拜見老師程頤一老師在睡覺一楊時在雪地等一老師醒來發(fā)現(xiàn)楊時在門口2. 通過介紹這個故事, 發(fā)表你的看法或者觀點。山東中考模擬）為了宣傳和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化, 某雙語雜志將舉辦征文活動來介紹中國的經典故事, “程門立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一個選題?！军c睛】本文首先開篇功能句Thank you for your ，運用多種連接詞，比如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章連貫性強，長短句結合，讀起來朗朗上口，不失為一篇佳作。為了實現(xiàn)自己的夢想，正在為此作出努力。【詳解】首先回答職業(yè)是教師。Dear Bill,Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school39。請認真閱讀下面的郵件, 根據(jù)信中的內容和你的實際情況給他寫封回信。6．（只要平時積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分數(shù)?！军c睛】此類作文首先要做的就是認真閱讀題目要求，結合所給材料確定內容，不能跑題偏題。為了使語言更顯親切，在寫作時主語用第一人稱，時態(tài)以一般過去時為主。（2）短文的開頭己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮?May 18, Saturday Fine Today I visited Water Park with several of my 【答案】May 18, Saturday FineToday I visited Water Park with several of mv classmates. It took us about an hour to get there by bus. When we arrived, there were a lot of visitors.In the morning, we went boating and enjoyed ourselves. We saw many animals, such as pandas, giraffes and monkeys in the afternoon. They are so lovely. We met some foreign guests and talked with them happily. However, during our visit we saw some people throwing rubbish and cutting in line.In my opinion, it is our duty to protect the environment and follow the rules in public. And I hope changes will take place in the future.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫參觀日記。請根據(jù)下面的內容提示，寫一篇日記。5．（：短語：full of；in public；again and again；all the time；encourage sb to do sth；do one’s best；with the support of。結合自身經歷，談談你當時的經歷以及現(xiàn)在的感受。）The following is for reference only（以下表達僅供參考）used to be.../make sb do sth/in my heart/have a deep influence/remind sb of sth【答案】例文Yesterday once moreIt goes without saying that our life is full of a variety of memories. Among all the persons I have met, the most unforgettable person is my father.I used to be such a shy and silent girl that I couldn’t say any words in public. Whenever teachers asked me to answer questions, my heart would beat again and again and say nothing but to look down. Once, I tried talking with my father frightenedly. He listened to me all the time with bright smile and encouraged me to be brave. He told me, “ you don’t have to be perfect but when you do your best, you make your parent proud.” With the support of my father, I gained so much encouragement that I determined to be a more confident person. In one word, Father’s love like water, deep and soft, which makes great differences in my life.【解析】【詳解】：該題目屬于記敘文寫作。請選取一個方面，結合自身經歷，談談你當時的經歷以及現(xiàn)在的感受。）當昨日重現(xiàn)之時，在腦海里的都是回憶。4．（修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關鍵。構思提綱。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如as well as，a good way to，take exercise，after all，be harmful to，municate with，get help from，be in trouble，in my opinion，spend+時間+（in）doing以及in this way，增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。The students offered different good suggestions. As well as going to the movie, listening to music, even going sightseeing at the weekends, some students think it a good way to take exercise between lessons. After all, too long study without exercise is harmful to our health. Other students feel it important to municate with our parents. We can get help from them when