【正文】 【 2】 her 改成 his 【 3】 what 改成 how【 4】 pletely 改成 plete 【 5】 has 改成 had【 6】 after 改成 before 【 7】 stay 之間 bed 加 in【 8】 got up 改成 get up 【 9】 10 minute 改成 10 minutes【 10】 is 改成 was 書面表達(dá) 作文范文 Dear Peter, I’m expecting you to e to China. When you arrive in Beijing, you’d better take the CRH train, which has been well developed and bee popular in China nowadays. It has lots of different lines, so it is convenient for you to travel wherever you want to. The CRH trains are spacious（寬敞的） , fortable and run at the top speed of 350 km per hour. They are seldom delayed and guarantee the safety of travelers. It’s easy to get tickets through many channels, such as by telephone, through the Inter, or on the selfservice ticket machine. Besides, prices of tickets are reasonable. It offers firstclass services to passengers and I am sure you will enjoy a good journey. Yours, Li Hua 。 注 意 ： 1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右； 2. 可 以 適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)， 以 使 行文連貫； 3. 開 頭 語已為你寫好。請你給他寫封回信，建議他乘坐高 鐵 。 注意： 1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2. 只允許修改 10處，多者（從第 11 處起）不計(jì)分。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（ \）劃掉。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 A man looking at his smartphone while walking across a railway crossing in Nanjing 71 (have) a close knock on Oct 22. He was so 72 (absorb) in his smartphone that he didn’t see a train approaching until it brushed past him, 73 (throw) him to the ground. This should serve 74 a warning that people should be aware of their surroundings, especially 75 crossing roads. 76 (lucky), the man survived, but the incident forced the driver 77 (stop) the train. An l8minute delay followed the incident, 78 led to a break in the running of other trains on the route. The Smartphone 79 (addict) has spread like an infectious（傳染的） disease. It’s evident that it will do great harm to society. What’s even 80 (bad), some addicts bee impatient with relatives and friends. Some people blame the smartphone for the sad story, yet in fact people’s weakening selfcontrol and selfdiscipline are to blame. 短文改錯(cuò) (共 10小題 ； 每小題 1分， 滿分 10分 ) 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。 The winner’s guide to success How do successful people think? What helps them to make success? To find out the answers, an American scholar recently visited some of the most successful people in America. 36 Be responsible for yourself Sometimes you may want to blame others for your failure to get ahead. 37 You’re saying, “You have more control over my life than I do.” Live life “on purpose” Almost all successful people live life “on purpose”— they are doing what they believe they should and want to do. When you live your life on purpose, you’ll try your best to do your job or study as well as you can. You love what you do and you can find pleasure in what you do. Write a plan It is very difficult trying to get what you want without a good plan. 38 A good plan is like a map to you. Without this “map”, you may waste your time, money and also your energy。 A A store that sells husbands has just opened in Ottawa, where a woman may go to choose a husband from many men. The store consists of 6 floors and the men increase in positive attributes（品質(zhì)，特點(diǎn)）as the shopper goes up the flights. There is, however, a catch（陷阱） . As you open the door to any floor, you may choose a man from that floor, but if you go up a floor, you cannot go back down except to exit the building. So a woman goes to the shopping center to find a husband. On the first floor the sign on the door reads: Floor 1 — These men have jobs. The woman reads the sign and says to herself, “Well, that’s better than my last boyfriend, but I wonder what’s further up?” So up she goes. The second floor sign reads: Floor 2 — These men have jobs and love kids. The woman remarks to herself, “That’s great, but I wonder what’s further up?” And up she goes again. The third floor sign reads: Floor 3 — These men have jobs, love kids and are extremely goodlooking. “Hmm, better.” The fourth floor sign reads: Floor 4 — These men have jobs, love kids, are extremely goodlooking and help with the housework. “Wow!” exclaims the woman, “Very tempting. But, there must be more, further up!” And again she heads up another flight. The fifth floor sign reads: Floor 5 — These men have jobs, love kids, are extremely goodlooking, help with the housework and have a strong romantic character. “Oh, mercy me! But just think…, w hat must be awaiting me further on?”