【正文】 The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine. I don’t enjoy that book you are reading. Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easygoing. 其實很簡單，同位語 要解釋的東西刪除后不影響整個句子的構(gòu)成；定語從句 —借用之前的關(guān)鍵詞并且用其重新組成一個句子插入其中，但是 whom or that 關(guān)鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前。其實就是主語從句，表語從句，賓語從句的變形。其實這個詞表 示的是先后或因果關(guān)系！ The snow began to fall, so we went home. 更多短語： then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that 4）失衡句（頭重腳輕，或者頭輕腳重） 有些人腦袋大，身體小，或者有些人腦袋小，身體大，雖然我們不希望長成這個樣子，可如果真的是這樣了，也就必然會吸引別人的注意力。所以呢，我們說話的時候，只要在要點之前先來點廢話，注意二者之間用個專這次就夠了。再比如： 走出房間， general 的詞是： walk out of the room 但是小偷走出房間應(yīng)該說： slip out of the room 小姐走出房間應(yīng)該說： sail out of the room 小孩走出房間應(yīng)該說： dance out of the room 老人走出房間應(yīng)該說： stagger out of the room 所以多用實詞，少用虛詞，文章將會大放異彩！ 六、 多變句式原則 1）加法（串聯(lián)） 都希望寫下很長的句子，像個老外似的，可就是怕寫錯，怎么辦，最保險的寫長句的方法就是這些，可以在任何句子之間加 and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后關(guān)系或者并列關(guān)系。我這里所說的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。 五、 多實少虛原則 原因很簡單，寫文章還是應(yīng)該寫一些實際的東西，不要空話連篇。相反，如果發(fā)現(xiàn)亮點 —精彩的短語，那么你的文章定會得高分了。破解方法很簡單，只要把下面任何一組的詞匯加入到你的幾個要點前就清楚了?？僧吘惯€是條理清楚。 二、 主 題 句原則 國有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主題： As a creature, I eat。也就是說，開頭很好，也必然要有一個精彩的結(jié)尾，讓讀者眼前一亮，這樣，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子： Obviously（此為過渡短語） , we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others. 如果讀者很難 “顯而見之 ”，但說無妨，就當讀者的眼光太淺罷了！ 更多過渡短語： to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 更多句型： Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that… 2． 結(jié)尾萬能公式二：如此建議 如果說 “如此結(jié)論 ”是結(jié)尾最沒用的廢話，那么 “如此建議 ”應(yīng)該是最有價值的廢話了，因為這里雖然也是廢話，但是卻用了一個很經(jīng)典的虛擬語氣的句型。 Fiveday Work Week Better than Sixday Work? 根據(jù)最近的一項統(tǒng)計調(diào)查顯示， 98％的人同意每周五天工作日。 Travel by Bike 根據(jù)最近的一項統(tǒng)計調(diào)查顯示， 85％的人在近距離旅行的時候首選的交通工具是自行車。 原則上在議論文當中十不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)虛假數(shù)字的，可是在考試的時候哪 管那三七二十一，但編無妨，只要我有東西寫就萬事大吉了。s science that makes it a small world(通訊方面 ). 當然 ,提高寫作水平非一日之功 ,要注意平時不斷地積累 ,盡可能增加語言的輸入量 ,才能厚積薄發(fā) ,寫作時才能得心應(yīng)手 。 On account of this we find that...。An illustration will make the point clear.。 Each has its positive and negative . 常用于舉例說明的表達方式有 :A simple example is...。We can pare A with B...。(2)表意清晰 :主題句不能包含兩種或兩種以上的意義 ,要易于識別、確認 。s high time that more effective measures should be taken . Therefore, (new laws should be passed to limit the amount of pollutants from factories. Moreover, in the households, there is an obvious need to reduce litter and waste. Let39。t have to look very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know (the secret of lies in preserverence and selfconfidence, the latter in particular) . It will exert a profound influence upon ( the achievement of one39。t have to lookvery far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know ( 5 ). It will exert a profound influence upon ( 6 ). With reference to my standpoint ,I think ( 7 ). 注釋： 1 ： XX 的第一個優(yōu)點 2： 支持 XX 的做法 3：不支持 XX 的做法 4： XX 的第二個優(yōu)點 5：舉例證明優(yōu)點二 6：說明 XX 優(yōu)點三的影響第三天我寫的相應(yīng)作文： The importance of selfconfidence Currently, selfconfidence has been the order of the day. This does demonstrate the theory nothing is more valuable than selfconfidence. It is clear that (selfconfidence means trust in one39。s bodies ) . Especially when ( the children are too small to judge what programs are suit to them ) . Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that ( they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their children39。 worry is that children are indulge in television and spend too much time on it .) .First of all ,(with somany programs to choose from , children are not getting as much exercise as they should ).Then , there es a case that ( some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millionsof children has lowered their ability to achieve in school ). Moreover , ( the effect on children39。s unreasonable behavior while children usually think their parents too old fashioned). Why have there been so much misunderstanding between parent