【正文】 寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。短文的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2．短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順； 3．短文不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。終身學(xué)習(xí)的意義1．人們上學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)、參加考試，但學(xué)習(xí)不只在學(xué)校；2．學(xué)校畢業(yè)，不是學(xué)習(xí)的終止。9．假設(shè)某英文報(bào)“我愛(ài)寫(xiě)作”欄目為了配合創(chuàng)建“學(xué)習(xí)型城市”，正在舉辦專題英語(yǔ)征文比賽。這句話用到了“the+比較級(jí)，the+比較級(jí)”結(jié)構(gòu)。句子because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in 。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。所提供的材料中列舉了“書(shū)山有路勤為徑, 學(xué)海無(wú)涯苦作舟”, 成功不會(huì)從天而降, 美好的未來(lái)需要靠不斷努力來(lái)創(chuàng)造。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤(rùn)色。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫(xiě)短文。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be going to, at the end of, give sb sth, if possible, take some photos以及with one’s help。ll be an English drama show this weekend. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We’re looking forward to your reply.Li Hua【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,I’m glad to tell you there’ll be an English drama show this weekend . It will be held at 8:00 this Saturday morning. We are going to hold it in our music club. All of us are going to wear nice clothes and play different roles in groups. We will perform English dramas. Speeches will be made during the show.I hope you can work as a judge and give scores for each group after their performances. Then at the end of the drama show, you can give us some suggestions. If possible, you can bring your camera with you and take some photos for us. I believe this English drama show will be successful with your help.We’re looking forward to your reply.Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，邀請(qǐng)外教史密斯先生參加英語(yǔ)戲劇展示活動(dòng)。提示詞語(yǔ):wear, role, perform, judge, suggestions, photos提示問(wèn)題:When and where are you going to hold the English drama show?What are you going to do on the show?What will you ask Mr. Smith to do for the show?Dear Mr. Smith, I39。短文中需要作者自己補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容完成得也不錯(cuò)這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，寫(xiě)作中注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。m sorry to hear that you are having problems with your parents because of using I believe things will get better, Yours Li Hua【答案】Dear Wang PingI‘m sorry to hear that you are having problems with your parents because of using Wechat. In fact, your problem is very mon . Cheer up and let’s find a good way to solve it.You may be tricked or get into trouble when you use Wechat. Also, using it for a long time is bad for your health, especially for your eyes. Maybe your parents worry about these things. In my opinion, munication is very important. Why not have a good talk with your parents about how to use Wechat properly? Try telling them you won’t use it for too long and won’t use it when you are studying. What more. tell them you’ll never add strangers without their permission.I believe things will get better.YoursLi Hu【解析】【詳解】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)一封回信。s worse, they have changed my password（密碼） so that I can’t use it. There has been a cold war between us for over a week. What should I do?Yours,Wang Ping要求：1．語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)意要通順、連貫；2．詞數(shù)80100左右，電子郵件的格式、開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Li Hua,I39。最近你收到一名叫王平的中學(xué)生發(fā)來(lái)的電子郵件，向你們欄目組求助。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。首先要注意書(shū)信的書(shū)寫(xiě)格式，要對(duì)來(lái)信中的問(wèn)題作出全面的答復(fù)。t want to study, I will think of the Chinese people who never give up in the film wandering Earth, who will inspire me to study hard.In life, my English teacher has the greatest influence on me. Whenever I have a great need, my English teacher always es to help me. She is the person who helps me the most in my junior high school life at the beginning of three years. . I like her