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m glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as well. In school, I also encounter some problems, the biggest problem is how to strike a balance between study and life. Whenever I want to play and don39。Dear DemonI39。,可適當發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順。請你根據(jù)郵件內容結合你的情況,用英語回復。比如,老師問:希望是什么?班長回答:希望是我們這個年代鉆石一樣的東西。影片故事設定在2075年,講述太陽即將毀火,已經不適合人類生存,而面對絕境,人類將開啟“流浪地球”計劃,試圖帶著地球一起逃離太陽系,尋找人類新家園的故事。最后要細心復核檢查,確保正確無誤。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構,造句應該符合英語的表達習慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。Mother為主題寫一篇短文介紹你的母親和你之間的故事,參加某英語網站正在舉辦的征文活動。s what she wants most,I think.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young.I39。show love.The person I love most is my mother.My mother is 41 years old.She is of medium build with long black hair.She is quiet.She is a history teacher in a middle school.She likes dancing.She can cook delicious food.She did a lot for me when I was a child.She bought whatever I needed for my study,even though she didn39。islovepersonshowneedlove.WeMotherWeMybestto…,trymyto…,It39。參考詞匯:give每家都有可視電話(vidcophones),孩子可在家通過電視和廣播學習,接受教育,機器人為你做家務……第三部分:再次點題——我相信未來會更好8.書面表達為感受母愛情深,弘揚知恩圖報,某英語網站正在舉辦以My英語作文一般分為三個部分:第一部分:開篇點題——展望2060年的生活。t like doing housework. Maybe in 2060 each family will have a robot to do shopping. housework,and so on. I believe the dream will be realized.【解析】【分析】這是一篇材料作文【詳解】根據(jù)題目要求,寫一篇展望2060年的短文,可知是一般將來時。t need to go to school every day. They39。m sure there39。The life in2060Sometimes I dream about life in 2060. What will it______________________________________________Keys:【答案】The life in 2060Sometimes I dream about life in 2060. What will it be like?Perhaps some people will go to the moon for a holiday,and some scientists will live under the sea. Maybe we39。詞數(shù):90調左右。某些人可能到月球上去度假:某些科學家可能在海底生活。此處go by, e to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少?!军c睛】本文結構緊湊,語言簡練。寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。【答案】My junior high school lifeMy name is Tony. I am studying in Grade time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is ing to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life. Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together. I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文,介紹我的初中生活。要求:1. 文章包含以上提示內容,適當發(fā)揮。提示:(校園干凈而美麗,活動非富多彩);老師(傳授知識,教會做人,經常鼓勵);同學(和睦相處,互相學習,共同進步)。6.親愛的同學們,初中生活即將結束,,名城中學九(1)班的學生。:拼寫是否錯誤,語法時態(tài)是否正確,連詞是否恰當?shù)?。:通過增加狀語,定語,連詞,使句子意思飽滿充實。寫作六步法::文體,時態(tài),人稱。注意書寫的規(guī)范:大小寫、標點符號等的正確運用??忌荒苓z漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。我們豐富多彩的學校生活帶給我們如此多的幸福,我們將永遠記住這些日子。為“希望工程”捐贈了200本書、50個書包和4200元。在老師的幫助下,她努力工作,在周三下午的英語演講比賽中獲得了第一名。我來告訴你一些演講比賽的情況。寫完以后,注意再讀一遍,看看有無單詞拼寫、標點、語法錯誤(時態(tài)、主謂一致等)。短文必須包含所給要點,條理清楚,字數(shù)80100左右。本文人稱主要是第一和第三人稱,使用的時態(tài)有一般現(xiàn)在時、一般過去時、現(xiàn)在完成時和一般將來時,一定注意時態(tài)的轉換。好人好事1. 昨天全班為希望工程捐書200本,捐書包50個,捐款4200元;2. 李明周一生病了,班長把他送到了醫(yī)院簡要評價要求:(1)報告必須包括表中全部內容,可適當增加細節(jié),但不要逐條翻譯;(2)報告的開頭和結尾已給出(不計入總詞數(shù)),你只需接著寫;(3)詞數(shù)在80100左右。5.書面表達假定你今天是英語課上的值日生,請根據(jù)表中信息完成主題為“班級新聞”的值日報告。短文中使用了一些較好的句型和短語,如But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesn39。其次短文中使用了正確的人稱和時態(tài),文章以第三人稱和第一人稱為主來敘述,主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時,動詞形式變化準確,注意了第三人稱單數(shù)形式以及過去式形式的變化,語法規(guī)范。短文有以下幾個優(yōu)點:首先文章內容完整,層次清晰,短文分三段,第一段先介紹了這個人是誰,第二段描寫了這個人身上的品質以及對自己的應選;最后一段結尾。同時語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分使文意連貫、自然。可以簡單句結構為主,輔以并列句、復合句。其次應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同,不要按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯。短文應以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主來敘述,人稱是第三人稱和第一人稱,注意謂語動詞形式的變化。題目中用問題的形式給予了提示,審題可知,短文應包括兩個部分的內容:首先介紹這個激勵過你的人是誰,他是怎樣的一個人;然后介紹他是如何激勵你的。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warmhearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang. He got the first prize in last year39。2. 語言流暢,字跡清楚。請以 “The person who inspired me”為題寫一篇不少于 80 詞的短文,向校報的英語園地投稿?!军c睛】點睛:首先認真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點;然后根據(jù)提示內容,列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達;然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時可適當運用表示轉折、因果、并列、比較等關系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等,還要檢查語法結構是否合理,有無重復、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構,造句應該符合英語的表達習慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。動筆前要認真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點,并可適當發(fā)揮。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱主要為第一人稱。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Editorial Office,I am writing to remend as The Most Popular Teacher.She is Miss Zhang.She is my English teacher. She is in her forties. Her small round glasses make her look smart. She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours. She is kind and helpful, too. She always helps us with our study. She loves jogging, so she looks healthy. To my surprise, she has donated blood many times since 2001. She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death. I really love her and I want to be a