【正文】
落內(nèi)部:主題句+展開句+結(jié)尾句4)首段尾段自然呼應(yīng),中心突出。traffic +For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a position on the topic Heavy Traffic in the Developed Area in should write no less than 120 words and you should base your position on the outline(given in Chinese)below.+;;。+Heavy Traffic in Developed Areas in ChinaThe situation of traffic in developed areas in China is quite congestion exists not only in big cities but also on the ’s reported that in the rush hour there are frequent traffic jams on the superhighway between Shanghai and reasons for this are of all, with the development of the economy and the improvement of people’s living standard, more and more panies and individuals buy a result, the number of cars nowadays is almost double what it was several years , the speed of building new roads cannot match the speed of increasing numbers of , the inefficient traffic control and bicycles running along with cars on streets is another reason, which leads to the rise of traffic my opinion, there are some solutions to the problem of heavy is to lay down more roads, which not only increases the number of buses and cars, but also speeds up the flow of is that the local government should open up more routes of buses or even this way, most people can take subway and , bicycleriders or taxitakers can be reduced and accidents can be avoided in great in all, if both Government and people try our best to solve the problems, the situation of traffic in this area will surely be improved第五篇:2014申論技巧指導(dǎo):議論文寫作要點(diǎn)2014申論技巧指導(dǎo):議論文寫作要點(diǎn)議論文是申論考試的重頭戲。如何才能寫出符合申論寫作要求的議論文,贏得筆試的勝利,邁出關(guān)鍵性的一步?這是很多考生的疑問。為幫助廣大考生,中公教育為大家整理了議論文寫作的基本要求。一、文體準(zhǔn)確申論考試中,給出的題目并沒有明確限定文體,但是,在題目的“要求”部分會(huì)寫上“觀點(diǎn)明確”、“內(nèi)容充實(shí)”,這正和議論文中要求中心論點(diǎn)明確、觀點(diǎn)突出相契合。此外,申論考試閱卷時(shí)間短,在短時(shí)間內(nèi)要使得閱卷老師快速抓住文章觀點(diǎn)、明確文章結(jié)構(gòu),議論文無疑是最好的選擇。二、觀點(diǎn)明確、正確觀點(diǎn)明確,就是要求考生要明確地表達(dá)出肯定什么、否定什么,贊成什么、反對(duì)什么。我們認(rèn)為對(duì)某件事情、某種現(xiàn)象發(fā)表議論,必須態(tài)度明朗,觀點(diǎn)明確,要讓閱卷老師直觀的看出文章的基本觀點(diǎn)是什么。觀點(diǎn)正確,要做到三點(diǎn),一是,觀點(diǎn)符合命題人的命題意圖,沒有偏題。二是,觀點(diǎn)符合客觀實(shí)際,符合普遍認(rèn)識(shí)規(guī)律。三是,觀點(diǎn)符合官方看法,符合社會(huì)主流價(jià)值觀。三、內(nèi)容充實(shí)內(nèi)容充實(shí),是指文章要論點(diǎn)全面、分析充分。一是論點(diǎn)全面。要求考生在提出中心論點(diǎn)(即總論點(diǎn))的基礎(chǔ)上要對(duì)中心論點(diǎn)進(jìn)行深化和細(xì)分,提出分論點(diǎn),以豐富中心論點(diǎn)的內(nèi)涵。二是分析充分。這要求文章不能僅僅停留在提出觀點(diǎn)階段,還要對(duì)觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行分析闡釋,比如分析觀點(diǎn)提出的依據(jù)、現(xiàn)實(shí)的意義、面臨的問題、問題可能造成的影響、具體的措施等。三是有理有據(jù)。既有給定資料提供的內(nèi)容,又有自身積累的素材(名人名言、理論政策),有理有據(jù),言之有物。四、結(jié)構(gòu)完整首先,要求文章要有題目、開頭、主題內(nèi)容和結(jié)尾。一篇文章,開頭和結(jié)尾最好是各自成段,不可與主題內(nèi)容混在一起。其次,文章的開頭部分就能提出中心論點(diǎn),主體部分重在分析問題和解決問題。最后,結(jié)尾部分在得出結(jié)論的基礎(chǔ)上,能做到反扣主題,深化主題的話,這樣的文章一定是上乘之作。文章在結(jié)構(gòu)完整的基礎(chǔ)上,還要做到條理清晰。我們認(rèn)為申論文章要想有清晰的文章脈絡(luò),就要做到以下兩點(diǎn):一是要按照正確邏輯順序組織安排文章的段落,如:按照“提出問題分析問題解決問題”的邏輯順序書寫文章。二是,文章層次劃分不宜過多。在字?jǐn)?shù)限定下,申論文章一般較短,1000字左右的文章分為五至七段較為合適。五、語言豐富隨著申論考試形勢(shì)的發(fā)展,為了在用詞以及句式上更加豐富,申論文章已經(jīng)摒棄了以往單一的用詞造句方式。舉例如下:,以體現(xiàn)專業(yè)性。如“加強(qiáng)網(wǎng)絡(luò)監(jiān)管法律法規(guī)”、“加大網(wǎng)絡(luò)過濾技術(shù)的研發(fā)”等等,體現(xiàn)針對(duì)性,而非一味的套用模板。除了“前提”、“基礎(chǔ)”、“保障”、“關(guān)鍵”之外,還可以使用更多的詞語,以避免重復(fù)。如“核心”、“抓手”?!爸破鳌薄ⅰ爸c(diǎn)”?!爸鞴シ较颉?、“力量源泉”等?!盎丨h(huán)”句式是指運(yùn)用相同的詞語或句子形成的循環(huán)往復(fù)的語言形式。如:“政治越能改進(jìn),抗戰(zhàn)越能堅(jiān)持???fàn)幵侥軋?jiān)持,政治越能改進(jìn)?!边@句話構(gòu)成了一種封閉式的圓環(huán)式,使韻律旋轉(zhuǎn)回環(huán),給人一種新鮮、奇巧的復(fù)沓美。中公教育特別提醒考生,寫作之前最好列好框架,草稿上寫好各段要點(diǎn),需要引用的論據(jù),便于申論的順利完成。