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goat. So the farmer killed and gave the donkey medicine made from its heart. 第四部分 寫作 (共兩節(jié),滿分 35 分 ) 第一節(jié) 短文改錯 (共 10 小題 :每小題 1 分,滿分 10 分 ) 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有 10 處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加 :在缺詞處加一個漏字符號 (? ) 并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除 :把多余的詞用斜線 (\)劃掉。 修改 :在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意 : ; 10 處,多者(從第 11 處起)不計分。 During the summer of 2020, I started reading books by English, mostly stories. I would learn a lot of new words from these books, but I had terribly problems memorizing them. I had to look up to the same word many times, for which was quite troublesome. I realized I do need a way to remember all these new words. It was a great succ ess for myself. I started writing down words from books that I read. I would e back from school and then sit for an hour and two. I wrote down new words and added it to my collection. By the end of last year, my collection has grown to 3000 words. 第二節(jié) 書面表達(滿分 25 分) 假設(shè)你是中學(xué)生李華, 6 月 5 日是 ―世界環(huán)境日 ‖,你校開展了相關(guān)志愿者活動,請給你的美國筆友 Mike寫一封電子郵件,介紹此次活動,內(nèi)容請包括: 1.時間、地點; 2.開展的具體活動; 3.你的看法。 注意: 100 左 右; ,不計入總詞數(shù)。 :世界環(huán)境日 World Environment Day 。志愿者的 voluntary Dear Mike, How is everything going? Yours, Li Hua 2020—2017 學(xué)年度第二學(xué)期期末教學(xué)質(zhì)量檢測試題 高一年級 英語參考答案及評分標(biāo)準 聽力 : 1—5 ACACB 6—10 BACBA 11—15 CBACA 16—20 CBCAB 閱讀 : 21—35 ACB 2427 DBAD 2831 BCAB 3235 ABCB 36—40 CDEAB 完型 : 41—45 ACADB 46—50 CBBCA 51—55 CCADB 56—60 BACDD 語法填空 : 61. living 62. fed 63. than 64. that 65. to get 66. off 67. closed 68. Immediately 69. medicine 70. his/the 改錯 : During the summer of 2020, I started reading books by English, mostly stories. I would learn a lot of new words in from these books, but I had terribly problems memorizing them. I had to look up to the same word many times, for terrible which was quite troublesome. I realized I do need a way to remember all these new words. It was a great success did for myself. I started writing down words from ∧ books that I read. I would e back from school and then sit me the for an hour and two. I wrote down new words and added it to my collection. By the end of last year, my or them collection has grown to 3000 words. had 作文范文 : Dear Mike, How is everything going?. June 5th is World Environment Day, so our school anized the voluntary activity. Let me tell you about it. On the morning of June 5th, we gathered in the People’s Square. Then, we carried out many activities. First, we performed a play about our environment, which attracted a lot of audiences. After that, we gave out leaflets to passersby to arouse people’s awareness of environmental protection. In the end, we picked up the litter and cleaned the chairs in the Square. In my opinion, the activity is really meaningful. On the one hand, all of us have learned the importance of protecting the environment. On the other hand, we have not only done our part, but also encouraged other citizens to protect it. Do you have such voluntary activities? Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 書面表達評分細則: 一、評分原則 1. 本題總分為 20 分,按 5 個檔次給分。 2. 評分時,先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次,然后以該檔次的要求來衡量、確定或調(diào)整檔次,最后給分。 3. 詞數(shù) 少于 60,從總分中減去 2 分。 4. 評分時,應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為:內(nèi)容要點、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準確性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性。 5. 拼寫與標(biāo)點符號是準確性的一個方面,評分時,應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。 6. 如書寫較差,以至影響交際,將分數(shù)降低一個檔次。 二、內(nèi)容要點 活動 時間、地點 活動內(nèi)容 看法 各檔次語言要點配分參考標(biāo)準 檔次 要點數(shù) 要點分 語言要點表達情況劃檔依據(jù) 第五檔 4 1620 語言基本無誤 ,行文連貫 ,表達清楚 第四檔 3 1015 語言有少量錯誤 ,行文基本連貫 ,表達基本清楚 第三檔 2 6~1 0[來源 : 學(xué) +科 +網(wǎng) ] 語言有一些錯誤 ,尚能表達 第二檔 1 1~5 語言錯誤很多 ,影響表達 第一檔 0 0 ~2 只能寫出與要求內(nèi)容有關(guān)的一些單詞 三、扣分參考依據(jù) 1、其表達未能達成正確句意的 ,不給分 ,如 :寫出了主語或謂語等關(guān)鍵詞 ,但未能達成符合要點要求、意義正確的句子 . 2、句子結(jié)構(gòu)完整、但關(guān)鍵點出現(xiàn)錯誤或漏掉部分關(guān)鍵詞 ,扣半個要點 分 ,如 :主謂 一致錯誤 , 或關(guān)鍵詞拼寫錯誤 (如主語 ,關(guān)鍵性名詞等 ),或謂語動詞時態(tài) /語態(tài)錯誤等 。 凡使用鉛筆答題、或答題中使用了涂改液或不干膠條 ,一律不給分 。 凡多次出現(xiàn)非關(guān)鍵性單詞拼寫錯誤或其它同類錯誤 ,原則上每4處扣1分 。 5、 文章內(nèi)容要點全面 ,但寫出了一些多余內(nèi)容 (連接或過渡詞句不在此列 ),原則上不扣分 。 6、凡書寫超出規(guī)定的答題區(qū)域 ,全卷不給分 。