【正文】 述父親節(jié)計劃；時態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時為主，描述具體建議時，描寫細致，條理清晰。高分亮點：短語：the plan for Father’s Day；some meaningful things；buy a beautiful card for him；give me some advice。句型：Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help；I am eager to receive your early reply。8．三年快樂而充實的初中生活結(jié)束了，你將進入高中(中職)學校學習。展望未來，你對高中(中職)生活充滿期待。請以“I Expect My School Life”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。要求：（1）內(nèi)容要點：①生活、學習環(huán)境(餐廳，圖書館，運動場……)；②師生、同學關(guān)系；③生活多彩、學業(yè)進步；④補充一點自己的想法。（2）文章不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和學校名稱；要點齊全，語言通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范，可以適當發(fā)揮。（3）提示詞：get along with；colorful(adj.)；knowledge；habitI Expect My School LifeI will study in a high school soon. Everything is new to me. ____________________________【答案】One possible version: （118 words）I Expect My School LifeI will study in a high school soon. Everything is new to me. I hope my school is big and clean with a large dinning room. And the library is full of different kinds of books. So I can read them in my spare time. I can get along well with my teachers and classmates. I can help each other with my classmates. At the same time, I expect my school life is colorful, after class I can listen to music, play chess and basketball. To get more useful knowledge or information, I can surf the Internet. I will keep a good eating habit. Do exercise often to stay in good spirits. Try my best to make great progress.As long as I stick to it, I can achieve my dream.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。動筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。寫作中注意將以前的自己和現(xiàn)在的自己介紹清楚，并介紹一下自己的愿望。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和將來時態(tài)，注意時態(tài)和主謂一致等問題。寫作中注意使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。9．英語中有一句諺語：Failure is the mother of ，但只要能正確對待，往往會獲得最后的成功。請就此用英語寫一篇短文，主要內(nèi)容包括：1．描述親身經(jīng)歷的一次失??；2．敘說失敗后如何獲得成功；3．談?wù)勀愕母邢?。注意?．詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；2．短文須包括所有要點，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；3．短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。 Life is full of ups and downs and it is never too easy to achieve success. As the English saying goes, Failure is the mother of success.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Life is full of ups and downs and it is never too easy to achieve success. As the English saying goes, Failure is the mother of success.I was asked to play in a table tennis match last term. Before the match, I was cinfident that I would win. However, I failed . How sad I was! luckily, my helped me out. He told me not to lose heart. He also helped me with my skills. With his help , my confidence returned and I came up with several new ideas. The next day, though I had to play against anther more skilled boy , I beat him! So don’t be afraid of failure. If we can deal with it well. failure can be the mother of success!【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇提綱式的給材料作文。要求介紹介紹失敗的經(jīng)歷，及從中的收獲和感想。描述經(jīng)歷用過去時態(tài)。2. 例文點評：這篇短文條理通暢，能將要點表達完整。句式豐富，能運用連詞使文章更有邏輯同時運用了大量的短語。3. 高分亮點：短語和連詞的使用：be full of ，ups and downs，too…to…，help out，before，if，lay against，deal with等。句型：(1) Life is full of ups and downs and it is never too easy to achieve success（2）Failure is the mother of success.（3）I was asked to play in a table tennis match last term.（4）The next day, though I had to play against anther more skilled boy , I beat him! (5) If we can deal with it well. failure can be the mother of success!