【正文】 the beijing zoo should be moved out of the of my classmates are in favor of the say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic also say that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the , other students are against the idea, saying that the beijing zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well –known at home and it should remain where it ’s more, moving may cause the death of some move or not, this is a big decision which has to be made by people in truly, li hua ，是英國諾丁漢大學(xué)的中國留學(xué)生。③．房子大而寬敞，許多人住進(jìn)了設(shè)施齊全的公寓?，F(xiàn)在請你根據(jù)下表把討論結(jié)果向班主任寫一封信反映一下，并說出自己的觀點(diǎn)。(5)深夜聚集在娛樂場所外等客時制造噪音，影響他人休息。請按要求用英文給組委會寫一封信。如日程安排、報(bào)告、解說詞、演講稿、觀后感、個人情感或經(jīng)歷描述。Please accept my sincere apology for...請接受我關(guān)于……的真誠道歉。I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/remendations practical/useful/。建議信1)建議信的寫法建議信是向某人對某事提出寫信人的建議。稱呼(Salutation)稱呼位于收信人地址之下的一至二行，頂格寫起，自成一行。二、感謝信thank you very much for....十分感謝...many thanks for your...非常感謝您...please accept my sincere appreciation for...請接受我對...真摯的感謝4i am truly grateful to you for...為了...，我真心感激您5thank you again for your hospitable reception and i am looking forward to seeing you ，并期待不久見到您。結(jié)尾：結(jié)束語和署名二．常用句型i am writing to share with you my opinion about ’s quite natural/understandable for you to do?, however,?u from my point of view, you should never go to hope my advice can be of some help to wonder if you can take my suggestions into am looking forward to your good ．優(yōu)秀范文欣賞2012年上海高考作文及范例你的好友因家境一般買不起名牌而悶悶不樂。注意：（1）詞數(shù)100左右；（2）不要逐字翻譯，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。②地點(diǎn)：3號樓103房間。dear editor, i am writing to you to talk about taking up occupations for college many graduates are looking forward to obtaining employment in big cities, not willing to work in the a matter of fact, there are not enough opportunities to satisfy most of the hunters in big cities while in the countryside talented people are badly needed and a lot of posts are waiting for areas are a vast world, where you can put your abilities to good use and you’ll be able to make greater contributions to the building of new , i believe we can have as bright a future in the country as we have in the , li hua ，你的叔叔三十年前離開家鄉(xiāng)去了美國。字?jǐn)?shù)：100—120個詞。后兩句說明自己參加了各種學(xué)?；顒樱囵B(yǎng)了多方面的能力。第三句中的edge表示“優(yōu)勢”。你負(fù)責(zé)為在該校就讀的32名中國學(xué)生籌劃圣誕節(jié)期間的蘇格蘭之行，為期7天，請你給諾丁漢的sta（students’travel agency）經(jīng)理phil發(fā)一封電子郵件，聯(lián)系有關(guān)事宜。④．裝了電話，買了彩電、洗衣機(jī)、冰箱等。贊同 反對 你的觀點(diǎn)1．人人有長處和不足，成績差的學(xué)生也有可取之處； 2．相互學(xué)習(xí)，建立友誼； 3．通過幫助學(xué)習(xí)差的學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)從而使他們建立自信。建議 要求加強(qiáng)管理注意：。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括： 1．個人情況：年齡，性別，學(xué)歷 2．個人條件：英語好，愛好體育，善于交際，樂于助人，熟悉本地情況 3．承諾：提供最佳服務(wù)注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好 2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫 3．生詞：申請—apply(v.),application(n.)志愿者—volunteer dear sir / madam: my name is would like to work as a volunteer for the winter asian ：避免每句都用第一人稱i開頭；內(nèi)容要點(diǎn) 、性別 、熟悉本地 、樂于助人 【同學(xué)范文1】第一檔（很差）15分 dear sir or madam, my name is would like to work as a volunteer for the winter asian am an 18 a local people, i know the roads and buildings very like sports very several years training, i am almost good at every i am a school, my english is good, i am also a kind i know someone is in difficulty, i will give him or her to defeat wishes for ：~~~ 【同學(xué)范文2】第二檔（較差）510分 dear sir or madam, my name is would like to work as a volunteer for the winter asian hear that the games will be held in this place where i hope to be a by this, i can lean about the world and take can provide the best service for the know the situation believe i can do ：要點(diǎn)安排混亂，部分要點(diǎn)理解錯誤；拼寫、語法錯誤較多，部分句型結(jié)構(gòu)有問題；【同學(xué)范文3】第三檔（適當(dāng)）1115分 dear sir or madam, had a happy apply for being a volunteer, i hope you can allow me to be a will do well in it and it and try my best to ：缺少部分要點(diǎn)，如愛好體育、熟悉本地、善于交往、樂于助人等；承諾部分比較精彩。這些寫作方法和技巧有很強(qiáng)的時代性，標(biāo)準(zhǔn)性和可操作性，透徹的了解和掌握應(yīng)用文各種文體的寫作不但對您在校的學(xué)習(xí)和生活有很大的實(shí)用性，書信寫作的五點(diǎn)要求v開門見山說意圖v咨詢/ 建議3v不同內(nèi)容可分段v感謝客氣不可少v期待回信成老套書信題的寫作方法：v（一）信封格式：名字、信箱、地域范圍由小到大，寫在右下角（與我們相反）。I am indeed very sorry for what I said/did, but believe I had no intention to insult ，我確實(shí)感到很抱歉。I will be more than happy to see improvements in this 。Once again, I’m sorry for any inconvenience ，我為所有的不便表示歉意。如： , Chaoyang Street Beijing, 100069, China日期的寫法英、美兩種格式都可以，英國順序?yàn)椤叭?、月、年”，美國順序則為“月、日、年”信內(nèi)地址(Inside Address)包括收信人的姓名和地址，一般置于信紙的左上角。為此我們決定舉辦一次晚會來紀(jì)念。第三段：表達(dá)美好祝愿，期待對方回信。③感興趣的同學(xué)請?jiān)诒局軆?nèi)與學(xué)生會（students’ union）聯(lián)系。內(nèi)容如下：① 時間：4月5日晚上7點(diǎn)。就業(yè)前景 農(nóng)村天地廣闊，可施展才華。5)．留下一些英語書給貴校圖書館，希望對學(xué)生有用。次段分五句，說明自己在專業(yè)上是個尖子生，并指出對于其他課程自己做得同樣出色，為將來的工作奠定了堅(jiān)實(shí)的基礎(chǔ)。第四句中的a variety of等于various,表示“多種多樣的”。要點(diǎn)如下：（1）希望能夠派車接送；（2）需要一名說標(biāo)準(zhǔn)英語，并非常熟悉蘇格蘭的導(dǎo)游；（3）請求告知旅行日程及就餐、旅館、費(fèi)用等情況；（4）你的聯(lián)系方式：電子郵箱地址：07747745007 注意：（1）詞數(shù)：100詞左右；（2）開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； yours ，希望結(jié)識一位中國朋友，以便學(xué)習(xí)中國的語言、文化。⑤．寬敞的道路連接了村莊和城鎮(zhèn)。1．部分學(xué)習(xí)差的學(xué)生常常違反校規(guī)校紀(jì)，擔(dān)心自己會受影響，養(yǎng)成壞習(xí)慣。文章開頭已給出?！就瑢W(xué)范文4】第四檔（好）1620分 dear sir or madam, my name is lihua,i would like to work as a volunteer for the winter acian am a warmhearted boy of 17, who is still studying in middle want to be a member of accept my application for being a volunteer, and i have been ready to make contribution to the ：能通過使用多變的句式和高級的詞組增強(qiáng)文章表現(xiàn)力，英語功底比較扎實(shí)。v（二）信紙格式：v 日期：背月份的縮寫v(January, February, March, April, May, June, July, August, September, October, November, December)v稱呼（后面的標(biāo)點(diǎn)是逗號）:Dear Sir or Madam, To whom it may concern, v正文：空4個字節(jié)或者頂格寫，段與段之間空行）v簽名：sincerely yoursv（三）開頭段：v告知對方你的身份（假如對方不認(rèn)識你）v問候收信人（假如他/她是你的朋友）v解釋寫信的原因vv告知對方你的身份（假如對方不認(rèn)識你）v Dear Sir/ ,v I was a student at your college, enrolled in Philosophy / I am a… at your…v / I am a … at your college, enrolled in the… / My name is…, I am…v問候收信人（假如他/她是你的朋友）v Dear Prometheus,vHello / are you? / I hope everything is fine./ How are things goingwith you?v/ How are you getting on in / getting along with…..?v解釋寫信的原因v（1）致謝：v / I am greatly indebted to you for(the double)you have done on my / Thank you for your letter about studying in / I am writing to tell you how grateful I am for…v / I would like to thank you most sincerely for…v（2）抱怨：v I am writing to plain about the poor service at your / I am writing to express my dissatisfacti