【正文】 focus of the society, “green campus” has bee a more and more popular concept in universities or colleges, which, undoubtedly, will bring us an everlasting benefit to both our campus and our concept of “green campus” does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in people’s plays a crucial role in educating the young generation and the consciousness of “green campus” will definitely produce a profound effect on students’ various environmental protection activities after their ’s more, the young generation is under the burden of severe environmental pollution and there are many problems waiting for them to make “green campus” e true, firstly, it is necessary to work out effective principles for the development of sustainable and recyclable , it calls for people’s awareness of the serious pollution around us and actual action to reduce the but not least, it is necessary to strengthen the ties between campus and society, so as to ensure that “green campus” can work smoothly with the coeffort of the whole 近來(lái)，隨著建設(shè)并保持“綠色地球”的觀念成為社會(huì)關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)，“綠色校園”也成為校園里流行的話題。profound長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)的。本次作文常見(jiàn)的卷面拼寫錯(cuò)誤如下表：正確拼寫 詞性及詞義 錯(cuò)誤的拼寫focus focuseeffect effection /affectenvironment envirment/invironmentburden burdon solve slove serious serous true turesociety soceitytheory thery總之，考生在構(gòu)思和寫作過(guò)程中要盡可能做到思路完整，恰如其分地選擇詞匯。由此也凸顯了對(duì)歷年真題分析的重要意義。 bring “a green campus” to its full play, effective measures should be “綠色校園”，必須采取有效措施?！径嘧兊木涫健糠段闹虚L(zhǎng)句、短句、簡(jiǎn)單句、復(fù)雜句交叉使用。范文點(diǎn)評(píng)范文以“綠色校園”開篇，保證了文章切題。因?yàn)楹芏嗫忌鷮?duì)于“綠色校園”所表達(dá)的內(nèi)涵感覺(jué)比較生僻。s was very exciting you could provide the position for me as I39。但表現(xiàn)出兩個(gè)出人意料：一是體裁，二是題材。對(duì)于題材，本次四級(jí)作文的話題是關(guān)于人們對(duì)于春節(jié)晚會(huì)的不同看法，屬于社會(huì)生活類話題，一反常態(tài)，沒(méi)有再次考查校園類話題。這無(wú)疑會(huì)給我們的校園和社會(huì)帶來(lái)長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)的利益。sustainable可持續(xù)的。畢竟，無(wú)錯(cuò)表達(dá)才是四級(jí)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)合格的核心。更多地立足真題，總結(jié)規(guī)律，切實(shí)提高自己語(yǔ)言能力，始終是四級(jí)作文備考的根本。 construction of “a green campus” will greatly stimulate students to take part invarious environmental protection “綠色校園”將會(huì)極大激勵(lì)學(xué)生參與環(huán)境保護(hù)。call for要求。最后但同樣重要的是，有必要加強(qiáng)學(xué)校和社會(huì)的聯(lián)系以便在全社會(huì)共同努力下使“綠色校園”順利實(shí)施。Above is my introduction to the Great any of you have questions, please feel free to ask me at any time.第三篇：英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文真題Part Ⅰ Writing審題謀篇本次四級(jí)作文主題為“綠色校園”，這是一個(gè)看似簡(jiǎn)單普通的話題，寫起來(lái)卻不是那么容易。 visit will disturb the normal always get into teaching buildings, libraries and so will make noise and throw rubbish , some tourists trample grass to take photos, and sculpture on trees to leave will affect the environment of the pus university is a holy place for study, not for It should not be open.【題目5】Part (30 minutes)Directions:For this are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a pany declining a job should write at Least 150 words following the outline given below:，并表達(dá)對(duì)公司的良好祝愿.【范文一】Dear ,Thank you very much for giving me so much time for last week39。 need, the uping performance should invite some big names including super stars from Hongkong and are all eagerly anticipating this unforgettable evening show.【點(diǎn)評(píng)】本次四級(jí)考試作文總體上來(lái)說(shuō)并不是很難。但是對(duì)于當(dāng)代大學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)，與大學(xué)生有關(guān)的社會(huì)話題也是需要關(guān)注的，這也說(shuō)明考試方向的變化：校園類話題與社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題同等重要,這一點(diǎn)對(duì)于未來(lái)考四級(jí)的學(xué)生的作文備考的方向有的指導(dǎo)意義。We all know that elective course can make a free space for everyone to show their strong points, develop their imaginations, creations and personal term our school would offer a range of elective courses which you can choose according to your own areas of always read all course information and analysis which one is suitable for us semester, I took an course about psychological health as my elective , it is a mon phenomenon that people go to have some psychological consultations, including students in always face great pressure from study and depressed for a long time, I doubt if I am physically I choose it as my eclective course of this the course, my mental state improved and foremost, I tried to build up a healthy , I realized that we need to find different ways to relax ourselves when we face severe , we should be to the electives All the universities offer various electives for students to may make different choices due to different as far as I am concerned, Fashion and Image Design course is worth studying for each , a good appearance may help us make a better impression in social way we are dressed helps us to preserve a sense of our own value and , Fashion adds spice to life with its rich color, variety, and world will be a dull place to live in if we always wear clothes of the same style and the third, also the most important, being welldressed is of psychological dress properly can enhance our selfconfidence in appearance, which will lead to confidence in our success in ’s the reason why I choose this confident people are the most charming people, I believe that Fashion and Image Design will give you an unusual Nowadays, there usually exists a wide selection of electives for college students to choose , students have quite different plans for their future so they always end up learning courses based on their own students may choose to learn a certain course in order to obtain an extra certificate for their job hunting after they assume that some more knowledge could ensure more chances of winning in finding a good may have their choice made just for tend to hold the idea that college life could be more colorful if they could widen their knowledge through elective far as I’m concerned, I’m inclined to choose electives based on both the value of the courses and the interest of my Nowadays many college students prefer to have electives in their spare time because the courses can offer a variety of skills and abundant knowledge apart from what they learn in the daily are many factors that may account for it, and the following are the most conspicuous start with, many students want to get another degree besides their own, so that they can have more petence when they seek a , as for me, I don’t care about degree or job, I just want to obtain some necessary skills to make my college life I’m concerned most is how to own more skills that may be necessary for my , some students wan