【正文】 語言錯誤)may feel lonely when they are outside home/outside/out/outdoor(s) (意思不確切)will feel lonely when they are far away from home (意思不確切)might feel lonely when they go out/leave home (意思不確切)may feel lonely when traveling away from home (意思不確切)may feel lonely while leaving home and going out (意思不確切)may feel isolated/separated when away from home (意思不確切) 0分may fell along when they are out (意思錯誤、語言錯誤)maybe feel alone when he is out（意思不確切、語言錯誤）who are away from hometown will probablely feel alone (意思不確切、語言錯誤)should feel lonely when working far from home (意思不確切、語言錯誤)may feel alone when they is single in another city (意思不確切、語言錯誤) 字串9 英語四級翻譯評分細則The nation’s population continues to rise ________________________ (以每年1200萬人的速度).at a rate of 12 million per/a/each year 字串91分at the rate of 12 million people annuallyat an annual rate of 12,000,000 by 12 million yearly 英語四級翻譯評分細則 increase 12,000,000 people every year (語言錯誤)at a rate of 12 millions a year (語言錯誤)at a rate of 12 million peoples each year (語言錯誤)at a pace of 12 million a year (用詞不當)at/by/with/in/under the speed of 12,000,000 per year (用詞不當) 英語四級翻譯評分細則0分at the race/growth of 12,000,000 each year (意思錯誤)at a rate of 120/ million people a year (意思錯誤)217。 chance to survive (語言錯誤)had the chance to survive (語言錯誤)would have the chance to survive (語言錯誤) 0分would have the chance to live up (意思不確切、語言錯誤)should have had 217?！　?. 。 ４、避免趨中傾向。 14分——切題。 考生作文分為0分時，若總分高于60分，一律按59分報道；若總分低于60分，則按“總分－6分”報道。表達思想不清楚，連貫性差。 ２、大學英語四級作文題采用總體評分（Global Scoring）方法。第三遍時，著重細節(jié)，目的在于