【正文】 people die from eating poisoned fish or breathing in gas. Therefore, environmental pollution should be responsible for these diseases that are disabling, or bringing death not only to human beings, but also to wild life.) From above, we can find that the reasons why (environment are polluted more and more seriously) are as follows. the primary reason, I think, is (the reason of harmful substances into environment. For example, to prevent insects, farmers make use of great amounts of insecticides, so as to have bumper harvests . however ,they pollute air ,water and land). Second, (the gas ing from the car engines and factories also make environment polluted badly). The third reason actually is (the result of a growing population in the world. Everyday, so much litter and waste are poured out from houses ,also pollute the environment). The significance for (controlling pollution) noted that it39。所以不妨試用下面的句型： According to a recent survey, about ％ of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation. 看起來(lái)這個(gè)數(shù)字文鄒鄒的，其實(shí)都是編造出來(lái)的，下面隨便幾個(gè)題目我們都可以這樣編造： Honesty 根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示，大學(xué)生向老師請(qǐng)假的理由當(dāng)中 78％都是假的。其二、關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻思維短路，只有湊字?jǐn)?shù)，怎么辦？用短語(yǔ)是一個(gè)辦法！比如： I cannot bear it. 可以用短語(yǔ)表達(dá)： I cannot put up with it. I want it. 可以用短語(yǔ)表達(dá)： I am looking forward to it. 這樣字?jǐn)?shù)明顯增加，表達(dá)也更準(zhǔn)確。 舉例： This is what I can do. Whether he can go with us or not is not sure. 同樣主語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)、表語(yǔ)可以改成如下的復(fù)雜成分： When to go, Why he goes away… 5）附加（多此一舉） 如果有了老婆，總會(huì)遇到這樣的情況，當(dāng)你再講某個(gè)人的時(shí)候，她會(huì)插一句說(shuō)，我昨天見(jiàn)過(guò)他；或者說(shuō)，就是某某某，如果把老婆的話插入到我們的話里面，那就是定語(yǔ)從句和同位語(yǔ)從句或者是插入語(yǔ)?？脊賯兛次恼乱脖厝灰ㄟ^(guò)這些關(guān)鍵性的 “標(biāo)簽 ”來(lái)判定你的文章是否結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，條理自然。 From this point of view... 二、內(nèi)容上 1. 化抽象的概述為細(xì)節(jié)的 描述 抽象的概述總會(huì)給人言之無(wú)物的感覺(jué) ,若再進(jìn)行具體的描述 ,文章內(nèi)容頓時(shí)充實(shí)起來(lái) ,變得有血有肉 ,不再枯燥乏味 ,似乎有生命力了 .例如 :Music is everywhere. 這是一個(gè)內(nèi)容抽象的主題句 ,我們找到切入點(diǎn)后 ,可在 everywhere 上做文章 ,于是接下來(lái)可拓展為 :We can hear it in restaurants, airports, hospitals, supermarkets and many other public places. 再如 :People can acquire skills through recreation. 這也是個(gè)概述 ,若充實(shí)以下內(nèi)容就豐富多了 ,即 : They can learn to fish, paint, plant flowers and do paper cutting. 另外 ,這里的 learn to 正好與 acquire 相對(duì)應(yīng) . 2. 從不同角度選材 選材時(shí)應(yīng)考慮到段落的單一性和完整性 ,單一性即一個(gè)中心思想 ,完整性就是要避免支離破碎或內(nèi)容僅局限在某一狹窄的范圍內(nèi) .材料要做到涵蓋面廣 ,而且愈典型愈好 ,但也不能憑空編造 ,應(yīng)以事實(shí)為基礎(chǔ) ,這樣一 來(lái) ,就避免了片面性或謬誤 .例如 :主題句為 Science and technology benefits human being much. (科學(xué)技術(shù)給人類(lèi)帶來(lái)益處 ),在展開(kāi)此主題句的過(guò)程中 ,可從農(nóng)業(yè)、醫(yī)學(xué)、電訊業(yè)等不同角度來(lái)補(bǔ)充材料 ,行文如下 :Science makes it possible for a nation to ensure food and clothing(農(nóng)業(yè)方面 ), science can make people live longer(醫(yī)學(xué)方面 ), and it39。s TV viewing ).In this way ,children will not be influented too deeply . （ I）說(shuō)明原因型 模塊（ 3） Currently,XX has been the order of the day .This does demonstrate the theory nothing is more valuable than XX . It is clear that ( 1 ). If you ( 2 ), as a result, your dreams wille true . On the contrary, if you ( 3 ). Failure will be following with you .It turns out that all your plan falls through . No one can deny another fact that ( 4 ) .You donn39。 這五個(gè)模板，在結(jié)構(gòu)上大同小異，掌握一種即可，所以我從中挑選了一個(gè)最簡(jiǎn)單、最實(shí)用的，稍加修改，給各位介紹一下。 obtusity / 雇主遲鈍 ]. To sum up, the main cause of [ghost writers / 槍手 ] is due to [hirers39。We can pare A with B...。也就是說(shuō)，開(kāi)頭很好，也必然要有一個(gè)精彩的結(jié)尾，讓讀者眼前一亮，這樣，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子： Obviously（此為過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)） , we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others. 如果讀者很難 “顯而見(jiàn)之 ”，但說(shuō)無(wú)妨，就當(dāng)讀者的眼光太淺罷了！ 更多過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)： to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 更多句型： Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that… 2． 結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式二：如此建議 如果說(shuō) “如此結(jié)論 ”是結(jié)尾最沒(méi)用的廢話，那么 “如此建議 ”應(yīng)該是最有價(jià)值的廢話了，因?yàn)檫@里雖然也是廢話，但是卻用了一個(gè)很經(jīng)典的虛擬語(yǔ)氣的句型。再比如： 走出房間， general 的詞是： walk out of the room 但是小偷走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō)： slip out of the room 小姐走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō)： sail out of the room 小孩走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō)： dance out of the room 老人走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō)： stagger out of the room 所以多用實(shí)詞，少用虛詞，文章將會(huì)大放異彩！ 六、 多變句式原則 1）加法（串聯(lián)） 都希望寫(xiě)下很長(zhǎng)的句子，像個(gè)老外似的，可就是怕寫(xiě)錯(cuò)，怎么辦，最保險(xiǎn)的寫(xiě)長(zhǎng)句的方法就是這些，可以在任何句子之間加 and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后關(guān)系或者并列關(guān)系。所以呢，我們說(shuō)話的時(shí)候，只要在要點(diǎn)之前先來(lái)點(diǎn)廢話，注意二