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yground. The books in the library were old and there were only a few kinds of them. The number of the trees and flowers was small.But things have greatly changed these years. Now we have a bigger playground and more basketball More different kinds of new books can be lent to us. Our school is as beautiful as a garden with lots of green trees all year round. I think it’s lucky of us to have such good studying environment. We will work harder and serve the people better in the future.I hope you will enjoy your stay in our school. Thank you very much!練習(xí):一、假如你是Daniel。3、不要使用真實(shí)姓名及所在學(xué)校名稱,否則答案作廢。美:反復(fù)檢查,包括單詞拼寫、大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號、時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)、主謂一致、完詞等,美化文章,在有把握的情況下展示自己的語言功底。準(zhǔn)確使用豐富的詞匯和語言結(jié)構(gòu)。恰當(dāng)使用較豐富的詞匯和語言結(jié)構(gòu)。需要指出的是:所謂十句作文并非一定是10句,很多考生的高分作文(80字以下)的句子數(shù)量都在8至10句之間(以句子長短和結(jié)構(gòu)不同而變化)。文章中語句簡練,語句變化多樣,有簡單句、并列句和復(fù)合句,也用上了祈使句,過渡自然,結(jié)尾表明作者自己對這次郊游活動的祝愿,增強(qiáng)了感染力。 1. 著迷于網(wǎng)上聊天,并花費(fèi)很多時(shí)間;2. 經(jīng)?;丶液芡恚荒馨磿r(shí)交作業(yè);3. 父母和老師不喜歡這樣,要我放棄這個(gè)愛好;4. 為此常感到有壓力,也不知怎么辦才好,希望給出一些建議二、緊張的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活就要結(jié)束了,你即將迎來一個(gè)輕松的暑假。 Dear John, Thanks very much for the information about the English evening class.(主題句) It sounds very interesting to me. (擴(kuò)展句) You know I want to practise my English and make some new friends. (擴(kuò)展句) I think this English evening class will