【正文】 dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn’t make a lot of noise.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示寫(xiě)一篇學(xué)校英語(yǔ)興趣小組的活動(dòng)中的發(fā)言稿。（4）開(kāi)頭介紹了今年端午節(jié)慶祝時(shí)間，接下來(lái)介紹端午節(jié)的由來(lái)以及慶?；顒?dòng)，最后歡迎大家一起體驗(yàn)這個(gè)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。霧霾天氣引起大家極大的關(guān)注。2.提示詞語(yǔ)：Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate提示問(wèn)題：Where are you going?What will you do there?When and where will you meet?【答案】Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，我通過(guò)微信告訴Lucy要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何時(shí)何地見(jiàn)面。在文章中點(diǎn)綴幾個(gè)并列句、復(fù)合句或復(fù)雜句式，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。他們說(shuō)（適當(dāng)發(fā)揮2—3句）……注意： （1）. 要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。介紹發(fā)生的一件難忘的事情，要用到一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。你認(rèn)為自己學(xué)習(xí)上還要多花工夫。因此寫(xiě)作前，要仔細(xì)看圖片，了解圖片中所發(fā)生的事情，并提煉出要點(diǎn)，列出所要用到的詞匯、短語(yǔ)等，或者列出大概的寫(xiě)作提綱。最后玩具的意義得到了升華，表達(dá)了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier），上升到了保家衛(wèi)國(guó)的層面，這樣的一篇作文是有深度的，能夠讓人感動(dòng)的，是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示，動(dòng)筆先應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀提示，確定寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。點(diǎn)睛：書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：People celebrate……，People hold……，We can watch……，We wele to……等句式的應(yīng)用。要點(diǎn)提示如下:（1）幾個(gè)月前，奶奶晚飯后去跳廣場(chǎng)舞（do square dancing）。在寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使文章更加順暢，自然。s more，on a bus，in need，be accustomed to，queue up，all in all等。注意事項(xiàng)：，條理清楚，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作的難度是逐漸加深的，在討論其如何獲得的時(shí)候要注意正確使用時(shí)態(tài)，在談?wù)撘饬x的時(shí)候要注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性，避免不熟悉的表達(dá)。要求：。短文中還使用了較豐富的句型和短語(yǔ)，如They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to ；再如So they decided to do something for the young tree這句話中使用了句型decided to do ；After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of that, speak highly of等等。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。根據(jù)題目要求可知，人稱以第三人稱為主。用be good at doing ，用like sth./doing “My/His/her favorite + 名詞+ is …”來(lái)介紹某人的最?lèi)?ài)。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【答案】例文Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close munication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It39。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，符合圖片所傳達(dá)的信息，表述準(zhǔn)確。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。銜接自然，順暢。首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，并注意表達(dá)的層次和條理?！弊詣?chuàng)建文明城市文明鄉(xiāng)村以來(lái),淄博人民萬(wàn)眾一心,眾 志成城,讓人點(diǎn)贊的行為隨處可見(jiàn)。你認(rèn)為人們可以跳廣場(chǎng)舞，但……要求：（1）開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（5）3．書(shū)面表達(dá)“小手拉大手,同做文明人。In rece