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school late and that made my teachers angry.Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to bee better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!【解析】試題分析:本篇書面表達(dá)以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”為題,結(jié)合本題所給的寫作信息,闡述自己難忘的中學(xué)生活。請用英語寫一封電子郵件,告訴他集合的時間和地點,在那里可以做什么,以及參觀時需要準(zhǔn)備什么。寫作亮點:既然這是一篇記敘文,就應(yīng)該完整地呈現(xiàn)故事,需要加上必要的背景,指明時間(Last summer),地點(in rural area),簡要概括事件(teach children English),這是文章首句的點睛之筆,信息量豐富。2. 例文點評:文章采取郵件格式,時態(tài)以一般將來時態(tài)為主。擁有自信,人生處處是舞臺,生活越來越精彩。寫作亮點:這篇文章講了自己最喜歡的玩具槍,描述玩具槍的時候有適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充,例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth(用黃布包著的玩具槍),這里用到了過去分詞作定語,作者還描述了玩具槍的功能(small plastic pills),順便還描述了自己小時候玩槍的經(jīng)歷,準(zhǔn)確使用了時態(tài)?!敬鸢浮緿ear students,I39。【點睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題,可以分三段寫:贊成;反對;你的看法。隨著生活水平的提高,大部分孩子得到越來越多的壓歲錢,有些甚至通過微信(WeChat)或支付寶(Alipay)收壓歲錢。最新中考英語書面表達(dá)試題和答案一、中考英語書面表達(dá)(含答案詳細(xì)解析)1. 假如你是李華, 你的美國筆友Bill給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件, 想了解你的夢想職業(yè)?!敬鸢浮縀very Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】【詳解】每年春節(jié),每個孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢(luckymoney)。可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文的緊密聯(lián)系,要符合邏輯關(guān)系。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名。寫作的難度是逐漸加深的,在討論其如何獲得的時候要注意正確使用時態(tài),在談?wù)撘饬x的時候要注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性,避免不熟悉的表達(dá)。8.自信賦予人力量,帶給人快樂。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點,動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點,寫作中,應(yīng)注意描述的全面性,盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上;提示的問題就是寫作的基本方向,然后圍繞要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮即可。短語和固定搭配的正確使用也為這篇文章增色不少,例如“adjust to…”(調(diào)整以適應(yīng)…),“as time went by”(隨著時間的流逝),“made great progress”(取得巨大進(jìn)步),“keep on learning”(繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)),“In a word”(總而言之)等等短語使用正確。提示詞語: school gate, nature, culture, food and drink提示問題: ●When and where are you going to meet?●What are you going to do there?●What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?Dear Pete,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition in I39。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會用一般過去時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。6.書面表達(dá)每個人都有自己心愛的物品,相信你也擁有一個自己心愛的物品吧!請以“A(n) _____ I have”為題,描述一個或一件你心愛的物品,并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿?,以及它存在的意義。5. 書面表達(dá)請將短文寫在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。是一篇議論文,第一段要寫贊同學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的人的觀點,第二段要寫反對學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的觀點,第三段要表述作者自己的觀點。每年春節(jié),每個孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢(lucky money)。s environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本題通過描寫夢想中的職業(yè),讓學(xué)生對未來有憧憬,給一部分提示詞,讓學(xué)生有話可說。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。為了倡導(dǎo)中學(xué)生接近大自然,某中學(xué)生英文報舉辦了一次征文活動,請你根據(jù)以下問題,用英語寫一篇短文參加征文。s all. Thanks.【解析】寫作分析:審題之后能明白寫作任務(wù)是要寫出一篇小論文,討論每日的作業(yè)到底是不是必要的。請以My Unforgettable Middle School Life為題,根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖,寫一篇短文介紹自己難忘的校園生活并描述對未來的期盼。靈活運用各種句式,采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各個要點完整地表述出來,注意主次分明,詳略得當(dāng)。d better …;I39。10.寫作某英文網(wǎng)站的“ Student Life”欄目正在向中學(xué)生征文,標(biāo)題為“ A time when I made someone happy”,請你寫一篇英文稿件,內(nèi)容需包括以下要點:1. Who was the person you made happy?2. When was it?3. What did you say or do?4. Why did it make him/her happy?5. How did you feel at that moment?注意:1.詞數(shù):100左右(題目不計入總詞數(shù))。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有