【正文】 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of highspeed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw rubbish everywhere.【解析】【詳解】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。s known that it has many advantages. So it39。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.，Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。假如你校將開(kāi)展“讀好書，促成長(zhǎng)”活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的主題，向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議。內(nèi)容包括如下：1. 你的壓歲錢的來(lái)源和用途；2. 對(duì)合理使用壓歲錢的建議（至少 3 點(diǎn)）；3. 呼吁大家節(jié)約用錢，把自己的壓歲錢用在最需要、最有意義的地方。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型或者短語(yǔ)，增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力。句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了一些并列句和復(fù)合句，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，使文章富有節(jié)奏。表達(dá)時(shí)，需要注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯表格中的語(yǔ)句，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語(yǔ)和句型來(lái)表達(dá)。句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。父母控制一切，孩子沒(méi)有自由。thinktroubles lives，in this case，in this way，in trouble。10．近期某英文報(bào)紙就“Snowplow Parents（掃雪機(jī)式父母）”這一話題展開(kāi)討論。內(nèi)容包括：應(yīng)該讀什么樣的書，以及讀書的意義。Changes my hometownMy hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to e to my hometown. Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every hope my hometown is being more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The Changes in My Hometown為題，介紹一下自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來(lái)發(fā)生的變化?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者根據(jù)題目要求介紹了自己家鄉(xiāng)治理霧霾的情況，并結(jié)合自身的實(shí)際情況，講述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，并注意表達(dá)的層次和條理。4．書面表達(dá)根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請(qǐng)將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。s helpful to people39。s health.（優(yōu)勢(shì)） However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（難題） In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（建議）【解析】【詳解】這篇短文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)了所有要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。每年春節(jié)，每個(gè)孩子都能收到來(lái)自長(zhǎng)輩的壓歲錢（lucky money）。其次要注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用原形，特別要注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式要變化，這是一個(gè)寫作的難點(diǎn)。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，沒(méi)有遺漏要點(diǎn)；且文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明確，意思表達(dá)清楚、明了。題目中用表格的形式，給我們對(duì)比的家鄉(xiāng)的過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在，我們應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，并對(duì)將來(lái)提出兩點(diǎn)希望。提示詞語(yǔ)：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important提示問(wèn)題：● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?Dear students, the World Reading Day is ing. So I’m here