【正文】 考生要想在本次作文中獲取高分，除了審題恰當(dāng)獨(dú)到，還要有扎實(shí)的語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)。另外開篇時(shí)，切忌拖泥帶水，應(yīng)直截了當(dāng)，使閱卷老師對(duì)文章主題一目了然。結(jié)構(gòu)完整，首尾呼應(yīng)，用詞準(zhǔn)確。最后是闡述建設(shè)“綠色校園”所要采取的措施。 need, the uping performance should invite some big names including super stars from Hongkong and are all eagerly anticipating this unforgettable evening Our Students Selecting Their Lecturers 1． 有些大學(xué)允許學(xué)生自由選擇某些課程的任課老師 2． 學(xué)生選擇老師時(shí)所考慮的主要因素是m sorry for here, I still want express again my deep gratefulness to your job and warm hope and am sure we will have opportunite to cooperate in the yours, Li Ming第二篇：英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文真題2008年大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文講座2008年6月大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試真題 （9：00－9：30）Part Ⅰ Writing(30 minutes)Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write according to the outline given should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in activities ，也可能有危害性 College students are enjoying various kinds of recreational activities which involve the following ones: hanging out with friends in parties and clubs, watching films, activities bring about benefits as well as in such leisure activities, on the one hand, provides them with great begin with, it helps to enhance the munication between undergraduates who are often busy themselves in their homework and invigorates their offclass , it will lesson their anxiety and pressure and give them fresh feeling, thus enabling them engage in their works by heart and the other hand, it does harm to , it distracts students from their some extent, they can’t find a good balance between the entertainment and a university student, I will spare no efforts to strike a balance between recreation and in this way can we develop ourselves in an allaround What Electives to Choose 但是這只能得到最基本的分?jǐn)?shù)。雖然模板對(duì)于考查學(xué)生的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)并不益處，但還能測(cè)試出考生的語(yǔ)言基本功。需要注意的就是作文給分的重點(diǎn)在于考生如何用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)言詞匯表達(dá)自己的思想觀點(diǎn)。關(guān)系詞的正確使用讓句與句之間、段與段之間銜接緊湊，思想表達(dá)成熟有深度。除正確審題之外，考生還應(yīng)注意語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用，不落俗套。如本文主題“綠色校園”可以采用多種表達(dá)：green campus和environmentalfriendly campus。【話題詞匯拓展】devastation ，毀滅existence ，生活healthful ，凌亂的participation ，參與preserve ，保護(hù)preventive ，凈化stimulation ，鼓舞arouse consciousness 喚起意識(shí)命題風(fēng)向標(biāo)本次作文難度適中，與之前考試中出現(xiàn)的“限塑”主題有千絲萬(wàn)縷的聯(lián)系。剛剛閉幕的哥本哈根世界氣候大會(huì)使環(huán)保減排這個(gè)主題成為焦點(diǎn)，在全世界都提倡可持續(xù)發(fā)展、和諧發(fā)展這一背景下的“綠色校園”，同時(shí)也是一個(gè)社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題，這是我們審題時(shí)所必須考慮的。第三段是談及具體的做法，分一、二、三點(diǎn)進(jìn)行論述，無(wú)疑是使“綠色校園”的理念落在實(shí)處。在深入理解概念的基礎(chǔ)上，考生還應(yīng)對(duì) “綠色校園”的重要性進(jìn)行剖析，這時(shí)，考生可以從多個(gè)角度組織素材，比如從校園的環(huán)境問(wèn)題出發(fā)，進(jìn)而擴(kuò)展到師生的環(huán)境意識(shí)對(duì)“綠色校園”所產(chǎn)生的長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)意義以及為未來(lái)環(huán)境改善所做的貢獻(xiàn)。s of people view this gala as an annual staple on the traditional Chinese Spring Festival all have a restless night and glue their eyes on the am not supportive of the view that the grand gala should be , it plays a vital role in the celebration of Chinese New increase its appeal and meet young adults39。t be able to join in your 39。很多學(xué)生把考前死背的作文模板派上了用場(chǎng)。從四級(jí)考試寫作的測(cè)試目的來(lái)看，還是注重考查學(xué)生對(duì)基本語(yǔ)法、基本詞匯運(yùn)用能力的掌握情況。而不是寫得越多，得分就越高?！旧鷦?dòng)的用詞】 maintain保持。不同句型之間轉(zhuǎn)換時(shí)，考生應(yīng)對(duì)句子結(jié)構(gòu)全面掌握，避免句式錯(cuò)誤造成扣分?！熬G色校園的構(gòu)建”可以使用create，build up，establish和construct等，以體現(xiàn)考生對(duì)詞匯多樣性的積累。 is little doubt that further consideration must be paid to our green ，對(duì)于綠色校園應(yīng)該給與更多的思考。避錯(cuò)指導(dǎo)本次作文在題材上，雖然仍然延續(xù)了我們所熟悉校園類話題，但與社會(huì)背景有很大關(guān)系。第二段，著重討論“綠色校園”的含義，指出“綠色校園”不僅指校園中的綠化，還指生活在校園中的人們的綠色和環(huán)保意識(shí)，把校園這個(gè)小環(huán)境和社會(huì)這個(gè)大環(huán)境結(jié)合起來(lái)，說(shuō)理更加深刻。根據(jù)作文提示2，可以看出此處的“綠色校園”指的決不僅僅是青青的草地和高大的樹木構(gòu)成的校園綠色風(fēng)景，也不僅僅指對(duì)校園環(huán)境的珍視和愛護(hù)，而是指一種環(huán)境保護(hù)的文化氛圍和師生具有的環(huán)境素養(yǎng)，以及由此帶來(lái)的和諧的人文環(huán)境和社會(huì)績(jī)效。【參考范文】Spring Festival Gala on CCTVSince its very advent CCTV’s Spring Festival Gala has made every effort to present grand parties to its gigantic audience with a galaxy of stars and wonderful has bee a custom for millions of Chinese people to sit through the variety show following the traditional family reunion simply cannot step into the new year without the gala which seems as indispensable to the New Year’s Eve celebration as the passage of years however a growing number of people begin to view the gala as “ chicken rib” unappealing and worthless when people can feast themselves on other evening even suggest throwing away the show which fails to give its increasingly demanding and diverse audience a convincing excuse to be rooted in the sofa and stay glued to the my eye the existence of the gala is still one thing with the variety show characteristic of Chinese tradition aired both home and abroad it provides the Chinese people especially those overseas with a good opportunity to establish their cultural identity on this unique another the gala a rare occasion of gathering of those performers is undoubtedly a treat for those in the remote or povertystricken areas.【參考范文】The approach of the Chinese Lunar New Year poses a national issue concerning the necessity of holding the CCTV Spring Festival established status is being challenged by a growing number of people, especially by younger is increasingly difficult to cater for all individuals deem that it should be canceled or replaced by other young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in that, the majority of midaged people and senior citizens uphold the importance of the traditional most striking feature of this gala is its traditionally close link with ordinary people39。t know the now I received the acceptance letter from the I couldn39。比較出人意料，又回到了老的考查模式。所以除了模板之外，考生還要在基本表達(dá)上狠下功夫，只有在平時(shí)多操練，在考場(chǎng)上才游刃有余。一般分成三個(gè)自然段，大概十句話，基本的分布為首段、末段合起來(lái)五句或六句，中間段五句或四句，做到結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，重點(diǎn)突出，就可以了。concept概念。最后，應(yīng)盡量避免單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤。從關(guān)注白色污染到關(guān)注博物館免費(fèi)開放，再到綠色校園構(gòu)建，四級(jí)作文命題重點(diǎn)在側(cè)重校園類話題的同時(shí)開始向與大學(xué)生生活有關(guān)的話題轉(zhuǎn)移。 construction is of vital importance not only to the physical development of students but to their mental health as ，而且對(duì)他們的心理健康也很重要。不同句型之間的轉(zhuǎn)換，能讓閱卷老師更好地了解考生對(duì)句子結(jié)構(gòu)的掌握運(yùn)用，從而獲得高分。第一段開門見山，強(qiáng)調(diào)當(dāng)今環(huán)保理念下構(gòu)建“綠色校園”的長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)意義。假如對(duì)“綠色校園”這一主題感到難以把握，考生可以從作文提綱入手進(jìn)行分析以獲取對(duì)“綠色校園”這一概念的相關(guān)信息。m a student who just graduate from college I must say sorry for your believing in could not be able to take this I have passed the examination to graduate I have mentioned to you at the interview that I have attended the graduation exam half a year that time, I don39。對(duì)于體裁來(lái)說(shuō)，本次四級(jí)作文屬于正反對(duì)比論證類的文體。除此之外，學(xué)生還要在作文中多采用閃光點(diǎn)，這樣就會(huì)使作文在基本分?jǐn)?shù)上有所提升，有所突破。參考范文Creating a Green CampusRecently, with the idea of making and maintaining “a green earth” being the