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短文要寫(xiě)得連貫、完整。可得 35分 二檔文: 內(nèi)容完整,重點(diǎn)描述比較充分,層次結(jié)構(gòu)比較清晰,語(yǔ)言比較流暢,字跡工整,有 34處語(yǔ)法或拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤;字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)畫(huà)面內(nèi)容,寫(xiě)一篇 80字左右的日記。 homework 。 可得 68分 一檔文: 內(nèi)容完整,重點(diǎn)描述清楚、合理,表達(dá)充分,層次結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,字跡工整,可讀性強(qiáng),語(yǔ)言流暢,僅有12處語(yǔ)法或拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤;字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。 1. Go over the requirement ? 1. topic : ? 2. Tense( generally): ? 3. Person: A story ( a traffic accident) past tense Tom , he ? Tom /ride a bike ? Along the street/road ? A few days ago/ the other day/ one day 2. Go over the pictures ( who, what, where, when, why, how) 2. Go over the pictures ( who, what, where, when, why, how) ? A car / run fast to/run into him ? Tom/ fall off his bike ? Suddenly 2. Go over the pictures ( who, what, where, when, why, how) 2. Go over the pictures ( who, wha