【正文】 亮點(diǎn)詞匯短語(yǔ)：one of．．．，．．．之一；green tea綠茶；be famous for．．．，因…而出名；keep healthy保持健康；be strict in sth對(duì)…嚴(yán)格；not only．．．.but also．．．，不僅．．．而且．．．。 寫作要求： 詞左右，開頭部分已給出，但不計(jì)入規(guī)定字?jǐn)?shù)。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般過去時(shí)態(tài)為主，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用了過去式，尤其是注意了不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞過去式的形式，如found, kept, got, were, spoke等。7．書面表達(dá)以下圖畫呈現(xiàn)了林濤和梅梅在公園里發(fā)生的事情。穿插一些高級(jí)詞匯和復(fù)雜句式，提升文章檔次和水平，使表達(dá)更加流暢。短文有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，層次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介紹了這個(gè)人是誰，第二段描寫了這個(gè)人身上的品質(zhì)以及對(duì)自己的應(yīng)選；最后一段結(jié)尾。請(qǐng)以 “The person who inspired me”為題寫一篇不少于 80 詞的短文，向校報(bào)的英語(yǔ)園地投稿。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let herhave more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，對(duì)學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)的博客進(jìn)行回復(fù)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表所提示的內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。 2. 陳述自己的理由。開頭介紹了我最大的個(gè)人變化是喜歡上讀書，接下來介紹我小時(shí)候不喜歡讀書，最后指出現(xiàn)在書籍是我的朋友。為提升文章檔次，應(yīng)使用高級(jí)詞匯以及復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。通過分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用第一人稱I來敘述，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般將來時(shí)態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章講了自己最喜歡的玩具槍，描述玩具槍的時(shí)候有適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充，例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth（用黃布包著的玩具槍），這里用到了過去分詞作定語(yǔ)，作者還描述了玩具槍的功能（small plastic pills），順便還描述了自己小時(shí)候玩槍的經(jīng)歷，準(zhǔn)確使用了時(shí)態(tài)。作者在短文中敘述了林濤和梅梅兩人在公園里給小樹澆水、并掛牌子告訴人們注意保護(hù)樹木。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。，幫家長(zhǎng)做家務(wù)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格信息，用英語(yǔ)為其寫一篇介紹，詞數(shù)80左右。Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. 龍井是我國(guó)著名的茶葉，它不僅與龍井的氣候、土壤環(huán)境有關(guān)，而且與龍井的生產(chǎn)工藝有關(guān)。My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays. 【答案】My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous , I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.I39。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。8．書面表達(dá)（本題15分）根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請(qǐng)將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。作者主要從三個(gè)方面敘述：首先介紹了自己的身份和寫留言的目的；接下來詳細(xì)介紹了自己參加這次冬令營(yíng)的愿望；最后是一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的結(jié)尾。用詞準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言得體，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。【答案】The person who inspired meMany people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng. Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn39。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2． 寫作假定你是李華，在一位名叫Tiger Mom的學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)的博客上，你看到以下內(nèi)容。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。其次應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不要按照漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯。Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit London Canal Museum. From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotsw