【正文】 easily．Ins this case,they think children have a successful life ,Children have no freedom to do is the worst thing in their life.In my opinion,parents shouldn39。亮點句型：It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking Longjing tea. 喝龍井茶對人們保持健康有好處。最后對家鄉(xiāng)的未來表達了自己的愿望。......（適當發(fā)揮一至兩點）現(xiàn)在環(huán)境：政府采取措施來改善污染，城市變得越來越整潔。題目中列出了三個要點，我們應(yīng)根據(jù)這些要點提示，來組織語言，充實內(nèi)容。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。s start reading now!【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。每年統(tǒng)計兩次鳥兒的數(shù)量，以研究鳥兒在數(shù)量方面的變化。請你根據(jù)提示以＂Bikesharing＂為題寫一篇英語短文，表達自己的看法和建議。2．書面表達根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇介紹我的朋友張陽的短文。Dear classmates,Reading is very important in our daily life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s start reading now!【答案】Reading is very important in our daily life． First of all，reading will/can help us get knowledge from all kinds of books．It can also help to open up a whole new world to us．Second，reading will/can make us clever and happy．It is good for our study and it can help us grow up．Third，reading can help us think more and further and make our life more colourful． However，there is usually so much homework for us to do that we don39。同學們該如何管理自己的錢，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？這是一篇給材料作文，本題所給材料比較詳細，寫作中注意將所給內(nèi)容表達出來，不能逐字翻譯。內(nèi)容如下：1. 由于大氣污染程度十分嚴重，去年已發(fā)生數(shù)次霧霾天氣；2. 人們已經(jīng)意識到霧霾天氣的危害，正在采取各種措施減少其發(fā)生；3. 你在日常生活中打算為此做些什么。請根據(jù)下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”為題，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文，不必逐字逐句翻譯。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者按照題目要求，介紹了自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來的變化。What is Longjing Tea famous for?Good tasteWhat is it used for?Keep healthyHow is it produced?Grow on the sides of mountains ...What’s the best place to learn about it?Why?Hangzhou National Tea Museum ...Longjing Tea____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tea culture is one of the most famous cultures in China. Longjing tea is one of the famous Chinese traditional teas and famous green tea. Why is Longjing Tea famous for? Because it taste good. It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking longjing tea. Longjing tea grows mainly on the sides of mountains. People are very strict about the picking of Longjing tea.Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. So Hangzhou National Tea Museum is the best place to learn about Hongjing tea.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料類介紹型作文，所以我們必須要結(jié)合所給材料再適當補充內(nèi)容。短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。a高分句型二：they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble.： 本文時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第三人稱，輔以第一人稱。Which引導的限定性定語從句。短文里還使用了一些較好的短語和句型，如In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner、More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life、There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every 。交通：新的飛機場已投入使用多年。文章內(nèi)容中敘述的情況不一，時態(tài)不能統(tǒng)一，根據(jù)表達的需要使用正確的時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。霧霾天氣引起大家極大的關(guān)注。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.____________________________________________________________