【正文】 tect us from heart can also contribute to the development of our ability to response instance, when you play tabletennis, you must try to reflect as quickly as you can so that you may fight back at the right position at the fight can also contribute to improving our you do exercise, you move a lot, and you have to be more helps you bee more will fill your life with various contents and make it more 39。Certificate Craze on CampusIn recent years, getting a certificate has bee a new craze among college students.[1]Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, [2]quite possibly, you may get the answer [3]that he or she is preparing for a certificate [2]of some kind.[4]Why does this craze appear?[4]There are mainly two reasons behind this , [5]it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce petition in the job can one make himself more petitive? More certificates at hand, , diploma and certificates are still important standards [6]by which many employers measure a person’s order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students pel themselves to run from one exam to another.[7]From my point of view, we should be more rational [8]when it es to certificates, [9]since certificates [2]do not necessarily prove one’s crazy in getting certifications blindly is [10]nothing but wasting conclude, we should focus on improving our ability [10]but not getting a certificate of no practical value.【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評】[1]祈使句使用恰當(dāng)。[8]“當(dāng)談到或提及…時”。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)劇拔摇睂υ摤F(xiàn)象的看法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。[6] it為形式主語，不定式為真正主語。___________________________________________________________________________：Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous ：很多同學(xué)經(jīng)常玩電腦游戲，這是浪費(fèi)時間，而不是一種有益的放松方式。[4]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。由于拘泥于傳統(tǒng)語法框架，許多初學(xué)寫作的人都喜歡用名詞開頭寫句子。這也就是省略結(jié)構(gòu)所表達(dá)出的英文的緊湊性。例句：An ensemble that performs B in which the other performs A is excused from the rehearsal after that （樂曲）時，那麼演奏B（樂曲）的樂團(tuán)就有充分的理由不去彩排了。能讓我們的生活更美好，也就是說。另外，如果表示比較結(jié)構(gòu)的句子前后有相同成分，而且此成分有短語修飾，后面的相同成分要由代詞來置換，而不能直接將其省略。事實(shí)上，在英語寫作中除名詞可放在句子的開頭外，許多其它詞類及詞組均可放在句子開頭的位置。[6]“我保證…”，that引導(dǎo)同位語從句。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：簡單介紹自己的情況，表明寫信目的：申請助學(xué)貸款。beyond表示“超出…范圍”。分析大學(xué)生熱衷名牌的原因。[10]“只是，僅僅”。[2]限定詞使用恰當(dāng)，使文章表達(dá)更嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，增強(qiáng)了說服力。s a word, exercise is helpful, important and absolutely Best Means to Acquire knowledgeKnowledge may be acquired through many way of getting knowledge is from traveling Another way is by conversation, especially one with a great person may also bee knowledgeable through other ways such as listening to the radio or watching best way to acquire knowledge, however, is through as a means of obtaining knowledge has a number of advantages over many other begin with, it is the most consistent way of getting can read regularly but few people can travel in the same , reading can ensure a thorough grasp of what you are interested is hardly so when one is listening to the radio or watching , reading is the most flexible of all the ways to obtain example, one can always read for ten minutes before going to bed, but it is not always possible for him to converse with others at such a late , there exists one problem about are all kinds of Books in are good, while others are bad.39。第一篇：大學(xué)英語四六級作文四六級的話題主要集中在與我們相關(guān)的社會社會話題和與我們的學(xué)習(xí)成長相關(guān)的校園生活話題，因此針對這兩大話題我為同學(xué)們準(zhǔn)備了以下的一些話題，社會生活方面包括：對待老年人的問題，行為舉止的問題，信息的問題；校園成長話題包括：謙遜，健康，知識的獲取。s more, exercise will help you get rid of your you keep doing exercise regularly, you will never be a lazy , exercise has great effect on one39。randomly意為“隨意地，隨機(jī)地”。[9]since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，表示既定的原因，常譯為“既然”。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：描述目前熱衷于大學(xué)生追求名牌的現(xiàn)象。[7]“遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)超出他們的消費(fèi)能力”。五、助學(xué)貸款申請信 1)簡單介紹個人情況2)說明申請助學(xué)貸款的原因、數(shù)額3)保證會合理利用貸款并表明還款的決心【行文思路】本題屬于情景式命題，要求寫一封申請信。[5]“with+賓語+賓補(bǔ)”的獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)。這樣寫倒是無可非議，但若通篇文章都是干巴巴的同樣結(jié)構(gòu)的句子，就顯得呆板生硬，缺乏生氣了。需要注意的是兩句中形成對應(yīng)關(guān)系的something要完全一致才可以省略，而且與相同成分相關(guān)的短語（主要是動詞短語中的介詞）不可以省略。第五篇：大學(xué)英語四六級作文Sth will make our life more enjoyable, that is to say, sth can add color to the dull routine of every day lif