【正文】 第一段表示歡迎 表明提出后面建議的原因 語氣親切，符合說話人身份關(guān)系 敘述詞和副詞 then使文章結(jié)構(gòu)一目了然 使自己的安排具有說服力 Moreover if you really want to be a good traveler, I advise you to read some introductorybooks to these places before you e to see them with your own eyes. With more knowledge about these places, you will have a better understanding of Chinese history and culture. I am eager to meet you soon in Beijing. Wish you in advance a pleasant trip to Beijing. Best wishes! Yours ever, Zhang Ying 引出注意事項 建議有理有據(jù)條理清晰 表達(dá)良好的祝愿， 符合文體要求 4. 申請信 (Letter of Application) (1) 申請信寫作方法 ① 首段： 自我介紹 申請原因 說明寫信目的 ② 主體： 詳述有關(guān)背景資料：資歷、教育、工作經(jīng)歷、興趣愛好； 詢問有關(guān)學(xué)校、課程等具體內(nèi)容。 My major interest are …, and I understand your university has a good program in those fields. (2) …… 年，我出生于 ……. 。 It seems to me that this experience, together with my education, has given me ideal preparation to assume the role of …in a firm such as yours. (4) 受我所學(xué)課程的影響，我對飯店、酒店管理產(chǎn)生了濃厚的興趣。 Your prompt response will be much appreciated. (2) 希望貴校能給我寄來空白申請表。畢業(yè)后一直在 ……. 工作，因此積累了該領(lǐng)域豐富的知識和經(jīng)驗。 (2) 寫作流程圖 懇請招聘單位或所申請的學(xué)?？紤]自己的申請，并表示謝意，期望回復(fù) 說明申請職位或?qū)W位的原因 介紹自我（包括：學(xué)歷、工作簡歷、在學(xué)校或工作單位表現(xiàn)） 說明寫信的目的 第一部分：說明寫信的目的 套語： (1) 茲申請刊登在 …… 上的 ……. 工作。 I am writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to establish a website of our own to attract more clients. 第二部分：介紹詳情、說明原因 套語：無 第三部分：提出建議 套語： 我建議 …… I’d like to suggest that …… May I suggest that…… In my opinion …… I would like to make a remendation that … I am writing to advise you of …… If I were you, I would …… 第四部分：提出希望采納建議，并表示謝意，盼望回復(fù) 套語： (1) 對你就此事的關(guān)注不勝感激。 【 寫作思路 】 第一段：說明寫信的目的，并介紹自身情況。 I am writing at the suggestion of a friend who graduated from your university last year and has warmly remended it to me. (3) 我已經(jīng)取得了生物學(xué)學(xué)士學(xué)位，并希望能在貴校繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)。 ③ 尾段： 表明急切心情，提供聯(lián)系方式； 結(jié)尾彬彬有禮，表示誠摯謝意； 希望得到對方幫助和合作。期待您盡快回復(fù)。 I am sorry to tell you that there should be cause to plain about … (3) 我真的很討厭抱怨，但最近有一件事情確實(shí)令人煩心。s degree in June, I would appreciate being considered a candidate. [第一段：引入 /說明寫信原委；或敘前誼 ] As you will notice from the enclosed data sheet, I am especially interested in puter science. You might like to know that during the past year I took all my elective courses in this field and wrote my thesis on traffic free city centers with puters. My knowledge and practical mand of English is adequate. I39。 縮進(jìn)式 ： Dear Kate, I wonder if you can lend me your MLA Handbook for Academic Writing. I am in the process of writing my graduation thesis, and need to consult the book now and then for standard formatting. Thus I might need to keep the book for about a month and a half, and I hope that would not bring any inconvenience to you. I assure you that I will maintain the book in good condition. If possible, please give me a call and I will e by your house to pick up the book. Thanks a lot. Yours, Judy 齊頭式 ： Dear Kate, I wonder if you can lend me your MLA Handbook for Academic Writing. I am in the process of writing my graduation thesis, and need to consult the book now and then for standard formatting. Thus I might need to keep thebook for about a month and a half, and I hope that would notbring any inconvenience to you. I assure you that I willmaintain the book in good condition. If possible, please give me a call and I will e by your house to pick up the book. Thanks a lot. Yours, Judy ? Complimentary close. （信尾客套話）Sincerely yours , Cordially, Respectfully, or Respectfully yours,. 公務(wù)信件的結(jié)尾禮詞包含兩部分：發(fā)信人的結(jié)尾套語與署名。 英文書信陳述 目的時，應(yīng)該直截了當(dāng)，意思明確，層次清楚，言簡意賅。s impersonal. The best solution is to make a quick, anonymous phone call to the anization and ask for a name。其中，①最為通用。私人信 件一般只寫寄信日期即可。 在考試中，由于篇幅所限，只要求考生在書信中包 括稱呼、正文、結(jié)束語和簽名四個部分。 Australia, 4。 4）檢查標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號。 ? 構(gòu)思 ? 構(gòu)思是對審題的進(jìn)一步延伸。 ? 4) 2分：內(nèi)容不完整，但是沒有離題；表達(dá)上有較大的困難；語言有很多錯誤，包括少量嚴(yán)重錯誤?？傤}數(shù)為 1題。 寫作評分原則及標(biāo)準(zhǔn) ? 作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)從表達(dá)和語言兩方面，只給一個分?jǐn)?shù)，即給印象分 (global/impression marking)。 字?jǐn)?shù)不得少于 80字 。 修改完善 1）從全局進(jìn)行檢查修改。 這一類書信主要包括事務(wù)信函和私人信函。 稱呼（ salutation） 。 Indented Form（縮進(jìn)） 。 ③ 月份名稱多用公認(rèn)的縮寫式。該項寫在寫信日期下一行的 左上角，格式與寄信人地址一樣。在私人信件中可直呼收信人的名字，但公務(wù)信件中一定要寫收信人的姓。如果是第一次給別人寫信，也 可 用開頭語作必要的自我介紹，并表明自己寫信的主要目的。 私人信件中，發(fā)信人常用的結(jié)尾套語有： Sincerely yours, Lovely yours, Your lovely, Your loving son / daughter等 。 詳細(xì)說明情況，中肯提出問題； 提出改進(jìn)建議，表明希望如何解決； 拓展題目內(nèi)容，尤其要強(qiáng)調(diào)如何問題不解決所帶來的后果。 For me this environment is very difficult to make studies and I need a quiet room. 第四部分：提出批評及處理的意見或敦促對方采取措施 套語： (1) 我認(rèn)為是你認(rèn)識到 …… 的時候了。題目要求中規(guī)定了要涉及藏書、環(huán)境等內(nèi)容，為作文提供了一些思路。我計劃下個學(xué)期開始上課，如果您能告知一些必要的信息，我將不勝感激。 I would be much obliged to you if you let me know the procedures I have to go through. 第四部分：表示謝意，期盼回復(fù) 套語： (1) 很抱歉打擾您，對您的友善幫助不勝感激。不是投訴信，觀點(diǎn)要合情合理，注意禮貌當(dāng)先。 提出對度假安排的建議。 Immediately I saw your advertisement in the paper for …I felt it was just the kind of post for which I have the qualifications and for which I have been looking for some time. (4) 我想申請入貴校學(xué)習(xí)。 I am now studying at Beijing Second Foreign Language Institute and will soon be graduated as an English major. 第三部分：說明申請職位或?qū)W位的原因 套語 ： (1) 貴公司目前從事的這種工作特別使我感興趣。 I hope I may be granted an interview, when I can explain my qualifications more fully. (5) 我將樂