【正文】 world and is visible from outer space. Because of its rich history and magnificent appearance，the Great Wall attracts a lot of tourists，scientists，and historians.The famous West Lake is like a brilliant pearl which is embedded in the beautiful and fertile shores of the East China Sea near the mouth of the Hangzhou Bay. The view of the West Lake is simply charming. Different time and different weather make it a different scene.Look forward to your arrival. There are many other wonderful places here. Wish you a nice journey.Yours，Li Hua【我來(lái)改寫(xiě)】——依據(jù)括號(hào)內(nèi)提示改寫(xiě)滿(mǎn)分作文Dear Mike，I’m glad to know that you are ing to China during Christmas. The following is a brief introduction about some places of interest ①strongly remended to you by me(我強(qiáng)烈向你推薦的；分詞作定語(yǔ)).The Great Wall of China is one of the greatest wonders of the world，② which is visible from outer space（在外太空就能看得到它；用非限定性定語(yǔ)從句）. ③Owing to/Thanks to/As a result of(由于；用because of 同意的短語(yǔ)替換) its rich history and magnificent appearance，the Great Wall attracts a lot of tourists，scientists，and historians.The famous West Lake is like a brilliant pearl ④embedded in the beautiful and fertile shores （鑲嵌在美麗富饒的海岸；分詞作定語(yǔ)）of the East China Sea near the mouth of the Hangzhou Bay. The view of the West Lake is simply charming. Different time and different weather make it a different scene.Look forward to your arrival. There are many other wonderful places here. Wish you a nice journey.Yours，Li Hua【對(duì)點(diǎn)訓(xùn)練】(2016并不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．表示歉意；；。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的廣告內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一份求職信。株洲質(zhì)檢)假定你是李華，諾丁漢大學(xué)(The University of Nottingham)2017年計(jì)劃在中國(guó)招收一批優(yōu)秀高中畢業(yè)生，你準(zhǔn)備報(bào)名。英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)寫(xiě)作部分應(yīng)用文（一）感謝信(2016Dear Mr. Smith,I am Li Hua, a student of yours. Yours, Li Hua【參考范文】Dear Mr. Smith, I am Li Hua, a student of yours. I’m writing to share with you the good news that our research group has just won the second prize in China Thinks Big 2016. It was recently held in Harvard Shanghai Center, from August 18 to 20. Here could I give a very big “Thank you” for your continuous help and encouragement? In fact, the research on the Inheritance and Development of Chinese Papercutting has benefited us a lot. It enables us to know more about our traditional cultures. It also increases our sense of pride to do more to promote its inheritance and development. We do hope you can give us further instructions and wish you all the best! （二）申請(qǐng)信(2016【我來(lái)借鑒】——欣賞并背誦滿(mǎn)分作文Dear Dr Dan，I’m writing to ask for some information about your school and how to be admitted to your university.As a senior 3 girl, I have always been considering going abroad for further studies, and I suppose it will benefit me greatly in the long term. I’m an outstanding student and good at physics and biology, including English of course and I hope to grasp this opportunity to realize my dream.Something that puzzles me is that I don’t know the exact time for the test and interview, and also I am confused about what I should prepare for the test. Besides this, I will be very grateful if you could introduce me something about the school life in your university, especially the after－school activities, spare－time life and the tuition.Thank you so much and I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours faithfully，Li Hua【我來(lái)改寫(xiě)】——依據(jù)括號(hào)內(nèi)提示改寫(xiě)滿(mǎn)分作文Dear Dr Dan，I’m writing to ask for some information about your school and how to be admitted to your university.As a senior 3 girl, I have always been considering going abroad for further studies, ①which I suppose will benefit me greatly in the long term(我希望從長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)來(lái)看它會(huì)對(duì)我有很大的好處；用定語(yǔ)從句). I’m an outstanding student and good at physics and biology, including English of course and I hope to grasp this opportunity to realize my dream.②What puzzles me (令我迷惑的是；主語(yǔ)從句)is that I don’t know the exact time for the test and interview, and also I am confused about③ what to be prepared for the test（為這次考試準(zhǔn)備什么；疑問(wèn)詞加不定式結(jié)構(gòu)）. Besides this, ④I will greatly appreciate it (我將不勝感激；用appreciate句式)if you could introduce me something about the school life in your university, especially the afterschool activities, sparetime life and the tuition.Thank you so much and I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours faithfully，Li Hua【對(duì)點(diǎn)訓(xùn)練】(2016河南洛陽(yáng)一高月考)假如你是李華，從報(bào)紙上看到中老年英語(yǔ)培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)Mid－Senior ESCH面向高中畢業(yè)生招聘暑期兼職輔導(dǎo)員，負(fù)責(zé)學(xué)員課間服務(wù)事項(xiàng)。全國(guó)Ⅲ)假定你是李華，與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好一起去書(shū)店，因故不能赴約。注意：:100詞左右。注意：；2．文中不能出現(xiàn)可能透露考生真實(shí)身份的任何信息。請(qǐng)用英文給Jamie回郵件。昆明質(zhì)檢)假設(shè)你是李華，是一名高中生。湖北八校高三第一次聯(lián)考)高考臨近，學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間變緊，任務(wù)加重，很多同學(xué)內(nèi)心壓力大，學(xué)習(xí)效率低下。要點(diǎn)如下：1．尊重并信任父母；2．常與父母聊天；3．換位思考問(wèn)題。食宿被安排在你市遠(yuǎn)大路的塔樓酒店。注意：(不計(jì)詞數(shù))；2．文中不得以任何形式透露地區(qū)、學(xué)校、老師或同學(xué)姓名等真實(shí)信息，否則按作弊行為認(rèn)定。longed by keeping a desire of learning.Nowadays，the more I am aware of the significance of this famous saying，the more benefits I will get in my daily study and job. 16