【正文】 習(xí)和生活情況。你認(rèn)為自己學(xué)習(xí)上還要多花工夫。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本篇作文按照題目要求選擇了城市A作為自己暑假旅游的目的地。8．書面表達(dá)根據(jù)下表用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文，內(nèi)容須包括：對下表中關(guān)于（City A和City B）的全部信息進(jìn)行比較，分析利弊，確定其中一個城市作為你的暑假旅游目的地。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。開頭介紹了我想要邀請你去老舍茶館，接下來介紹我們?nèi)ツ抢镒鍪裁矗詈笾赋鑫覀円诤螘r何地見面。5．假如你叫李華，最近你班里的美國交換生Lucy想要感受中國的傳統(tǒng)文化。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息。t return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it39。社會現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn)，飽受贊譽(yù)?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者按照題目要求，介紹了自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來的變化。將來希望……（兩點(diǎn)）要求：1. 短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；2. 短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。請根據(jù)下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”為題，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文，不必逐字逐句翻譯。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。要求：1. 意思連貫，語句通順；2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右；短文的開頭已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)） 3. 參考詞匯： at a fixed time 定時emergency 緊急情況 cpany sb. 陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also acpany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in 【答案】 The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us.【解析】【詳解】假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校正在進(jìn)行課堂教學(xué)改革，經(jīng)過一段時間的適應(yīng)，同學(xué)們發(fā)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化，請你根據(jù)所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的文章，談?wù)勀愕母惺芎拖敕?，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）。......（適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一至兩點(diǎn)）現(xiàn)在環(huán)境：政府采取措施來改善污染，城市變得越來越整潔。審題可知，作文的基本框架和大概內(nèi)容都有了，需要注意的是在描寫過去的時候，需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一到兩點(diǎn)；還有對將來的希望也需要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮。最后對家鄉(xiāng)的未來表達(dá)了自己的愿望。作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。前兩個內(nèi)容我們需要根據(jù)表格的提示用正確的英語表達(dá)，而自己的觀點(diǎn)則需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，組織語言，并表達(dá)出來，要求至少兩點(diǎn)。其次短文中使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r態(tài)和人稱，文章以第三人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式富于變化。提示詞語：Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate提示問題：Where are you going?What will you do there?When and where will you meet?【答案】Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，我通過微信告訴Lucy要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何時何地見面。假如你是李華，請你寫一封倡議書，向全體同學(xué)發(fā)出號召。我們的國家主席習(xí)近平多次強(qiáng)調(diào)良好家風(fēng)家規(guī)的重要性。【點(diǎn)睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。雖然字?jǐn)?shù)要求不多，但可以很好地考查考生英語寫作的基本功，需要考生對常用的英語句型熟練掌握。在比較的時候，作者用了多種方式，使句子不單調(diào)，比如在比較溫度時，直接用比較級“higher”在說旅館時用了“l(fā)ess fortable ”，比較食物時，用了“as…as”等。他們希望你們實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的理想?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞?！驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)內(nèi)容可知，這是一篇書信類