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擬)Dear John,How nice to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to keep health. I would like to give you some advice.→healthyAs you know,our teenagers grow very fast,so we need→weplenty nutritious food, such as fish, meat, and beans,specially fresh vegetables and fruits. You’d better not→especiallyto eat too much sweet. Also, you should take exercisesregularly instead of studying in the classroom all the times.→timeFor example,you can play basketball and swim after school.→orWhat’s more, having enough sleep are very important.→isSo I advise you to have at least eight hours of sleep every9.√day and not to stay up too lately. Only in this way can you→latekeep fit.Best wishes!Yours, Tom。1(2009(11)用詞是否恰當(dāng)、準(zhǔn)確。(3)非謂語動(dòng)詞的形式、分詞作狀語時(shí)與句子主語的一致問題。如英語不可說She shook head,而應(yīng)說She shook her head.(3)錯(cuò)詞:錯(cuò)詞的類型復(fù)雜,不勝枚舉。短文改錯(cuò)突破1.錯(cuò)誤形式(1)多詞:多余的詞,往往是結(jié)構(gòu)詞,如冠詞、介詞、代詞等。不是固定搭配的,也要注意英語行文習(xí)慣或邏輯上的搭配。(2)動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂一致、動(dòng)詞詞組的固定搭配。(10)疑問、否定(完全否定、部分否定)使用是否正確。只要仔細(xì)分析,綜合考慮,就能作出正確的