【正文】 n college and society, many college student cadres gradually show undesirable tendency towards mistakenly regard their duties as strange phenomenon not only reveals the immature of young adults, but also discloses that those cadres haven’t realized the nature of Students’ following factors can account for , selfcultivation of college student cadres is not good they lack social experience, they make mistakes easily with the desires for quick , the checkup systems in colleges overemphasize their performance in Students’ Union, so student cadres only focus on pursuits of outstanding things considered, universities should reinforce guidance and education for college student cadres and help them build up a stronger sense of services.【點評】大學生干部曾經(jīng)是一個時代活力動力、正氣朝氣、理想希望的象征。 economic burdens, especially to those from poor all these new jobs meet the real demands of modern times, they can ensure college students to keep pace with the times and get selfimprovements according to the needs of 39。 doing parttime jobs will help them gain working experience, learn more of society as well as realize the importance of saving importantly, it helps to lighten financial burdens of parents.【點評】文章第一段開門見山，指出關(guān)于誰支付大學學費的不同意見。第一段中severe employment situation意為“嚴峻的就業(yè)形勢”；finding ways out意為“尋求出路”；第二段中in favor of 意為“支持”；not only?but also意為“不僅??而且??”；Last but not the least意為“最后但是最重要的是”?！?文章第二段中列舉該現(xiàn)象的危害，分別用 First,?Second,?Third表示“首先??其次??再次”。第二段從幾個方面說明品德教育的重要性：滿足學生全面發(fā)展的需要；防止學生變得自私，自利，自負，沒有禮貌等等；教導學生對自己和祖國的將來負責。2． 你對此有什么看法和建議？【范文】In recent years, many university students would like to stay at home or dormitory rather than to attend pulsory courses, take exercises or join in social kind of unhealthy lifestyle will do harm to their physical conditions to some extend, and reduce their scope of lifestyles of university students are caused by their reversed biological clock, addiction to puter games, irregular dietary structure, all kinds of petition pressures, and so improve this way of life, joined efforts are to universities, they should hold the idea “health es first” and educate students to conscientiously observe the rules of discipline and study should cooperate with universities by creating fortable atmosphere at importantly, university students themselves should form good habits and healthy interests, take extracurricular activities positively and do exercises regularly.【點評】文章開門見上，指出大學生的不良生活方式，簡單提及其危害。作為核心概念，它肯定要被多次提及。這在寫文章中可被看做一個“破”的過程。個體的一份小小的努力，卻能為世界帶來巨大的改變。2． to jump to / to soar to..一躍達到/ 猛增到…The total working days lost soared to 10 million in ．…an increase of about…percent as pared with..與…相比大約增加了…4．…to experience an increase/incline …有了增長二．二、下降，減少1．…to sink/drop/reduce to… 減少到… rate of strikes sank/dropped to the lowest point in ．…to experience a decrease/decline … consumption is experiencing a ：修飾上升/減少的副詞有： rapidly slowly dramatically respectively表達上升/減少的最后狀態(tài)的詞有：the highest peak the lowest point 10 million 10%三．起伏1．…to go up and down …起伏不定 strike rate went up and down during the period from 1952 to ．There be ups and downs …有起有伏 1972 and 1979, there were several ups and downs in（某方面）四．穩(wěn)定1．…to remain steady/level/unchanged …保持穩(wěn)定，幾乎不變 rate of …remained steady(fairly level/almost unchanged)during the four years from 1963 to ．…to level off(vi.) a steady decline for a whole decade, the …rate shows signs of leveling ．成正比，反比1．…be in direct /inverse ratio to/with 與…成正比/反比 illustrations are in direct ratio to /with the advancement of grades, while female illustrations are in inverse ． 占百分之幾，幾分之幾1….to form/prise/make up/constitute ….percent …占百分之… prise more than 50% of the ．…to form/prise/constitute a half/third/fourth of……占…的1/2,1/3,1/4 illustrions form less than a fourth of the ．…account for…percent 占百分之幾eg.……, accounting for approximately 20 percent of…七．倍數(shù)1．A be …times as much/many as B2．A doubles/is half/triples B。附：萬能模板范文（必看?。㎞owadays, there are more and more [某種現(xiàn)象] in [某種場合].It is estimated that [相關(guān)數(shù)據(jù)].Why have there been so many [某種現(xiàn)象]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as first one is [原因一].Besides, [原因二].The third one is [原因三].To sum up, the main cause of [某種現(xiàn)象] is due to [最主要原因].It is high time that something were done upon one thing, [解決辦法一].On the other hand, [解決辦法二].All these measures will certainly reduce the number of [某種現(xiàn)象].下面就是專門針對爭議性論文的一種句型When it es to．．．，some people think ／believe that．．．，others argue ／claim that opposite ／reverse is true．There is probably some truth in both arguments ／statements，but．．．當說到……，有些人認為……，但另一些人則持相反的觀點……。（8）When it es to...most people believe that...but other people regard...as....提到_________問題，很多人認為_________，不過，一些人則認為______是____.（9）Some people contend that...has proved to bring many advantages(disadvantages)有些人認為________有很多有利之處(不利之處)。Some people sayXis their hold their viewfor the reason of is more, X。3）.last but not 。不同的人對此有不同的看法是可以理解的。一方面，另一方面。不過，問題是：“我們該如何抉擇?”（5）People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the same 。（14）According to my personality and fondness I would prefer...rather than...根據(jù)我的個性以及愛好，我選擇_______而不會選擇__________。 and more people are realizing the importance of… efforts/More measures/Due attention must be taken/paid to do ………, will there be anything that can make me even happier?如果（我們怎么做），那將沒有比這令我更高興的了。我們應該意識到，就在眼下，我國的許多地區(qū)正遭受著史無前例的干旱與電荒。文章第一段，開門見山地重申題目中的命題，然后闡述該命題的意義。第三段是結(jié)尾，提出了在新時代做一個合格大學生的標準，即必須具有環(huán)保意識。這些詞匯在文章的不同地方出現(xiàn)，使整篇文章得以圍繞著一個統(tǒng)一的主題來展開，從而避免了跑題的可能性。【范文】Normally school education aims to cultivate students39。文章第二段分析了該現(xiàn)象的危害：加劇窮富差距和不公平；導致“潛在的”人才流失；不利于建立和諧社會。t be gotten from , it benefits students a lot since it helps them to realize clearly what their real potentials are, and in which kind of jobs they really show but not the least, it improves university students39。s tuition, hot discussions have arisen about who should pay the university39。第二段中g(shù)ain working experience意為 “獲取社會經(jīng)驗”；lighten financial burdens意為“減輕經(jīng)濟負擔”。第一段第一句中cyber wr