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oday trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it’s famous 76. _____ Mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather 77. _____ Was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 78. _____ the mountain, the three of them were very excited. As we 79. _____ climbed the mountain, we ed monkeys, visiting temples 80. _____ and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. 82. _____ Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top 83. _____ of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was 84. _____ good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my 85. _____ head touched the pillow. 答案與簡析: 76. famous前加上 a。只有把” you”改為” we”。檢查一改過的地方是否準(zhǔn) 確,前后是否有矛盾的地方,以進(jìn)行必要的修改和調(diào)整。此處的“請柬”是特指。 9. was →is 。 2. the →a 。這是祈使句的否定式,動詞應(yīng)該用原形。 短文改錯的錯誤類型 : ( 1)抽象名詞 ‘ 物質(zhì)名詞泛指前多加冠詞。 ( 5)受母語影響將形容詞或介詞作動詞而使句子缺少謂語動詞。 . 。 ( 2)冠詞,介詞,代詞,連詞和動詞等用法上的錯誤。 ( 3)形容詞或副詞的比較結(jié)構(gòu)中多詞。從上下文語義可知。 3. Dangerous →danger 。 10. before →after 。 4. 6. 去掉 at。屬句型 It is +adj. + to do sth .。 這一步應(yīng)是速度短文,以掌握文意為主,而不是只注意文中錯誤,分析錯誤的句子 上。 77. 正確 78. we前面加 when,引導(dǎo)一個時間狀語從句。例如 : for 改成 of Instead后加 of were Where改成 which NMET’96 The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home. NMET’97 First, let me tell you something more about myself. NMET’99 … no way of setting the matter except by selling the set. Now someone at home reads instead. 上述第一例中的主語是 Smiths(史密斯夫婦倆),因此后面的 his不合邏輯。一般的現(xiàn)在分 詞有主動態(tài)和進(jìn)行時的含義,而過去分詞