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hearted, hospital 之類的形象詞。 舉例: This is what I can do. Whether he can go with us or not is not sure. 同樣主語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)、表語(yǔ)可以改成如下的復(fù)雜成分: When to go, Why he goes away… 5)附加(多此一舉) 如果有了老婆,總會(huì)遇到這樣的情況,當(dāng)你再講某個(gè)人的時(shí)候,她會(huì)插一句說(shuō),我昨天見(jiàn)過(guò)他;或者說(shuō),就是某某某,如果把老婆的話插入到我們的話里面,那就是定語(yǔ)從句和同位語(yǔ)從句或者是插入語(yǔ)。 6)排比(排山倒海句) 文學(xué)作品中最吸引人的地方莫過(guò)于此,如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話,那么我希望你引用一個(gè)個(gè)的排比句,一個(gè)個(gè)得對(duì)偶句,一個(gè)個(gè)的不定式,一個(gè)個(gè)地詞,一個(gè)個(gè)的短語(yǔ),如此表達(dá)將會(huì)使文章有排山倒海之勢(shì) ! Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you. Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides. We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (氣勢(shì)恢宏) 要想寫出如此氣勢(shì)恢宏的句子非用排比不可! 七、 挑戰(zhàn)極限原則 既然十挑戰(zhàn)極限,必然是比較難的,但是并非不可攀! 原理:在學(xué)生的文章中,很少發(fā)現(xiàn)諸如獨(dú)立主格的句子,其實(shí)也很簡(jiǎn)單,只要花上 5分鐘的時(shí)間看看就可以領(lǐng)會(huì),它就是分詞的一種特殊形式,分詞要求主語(yǔ)一致,而獨(dú)立主格則不然。比如說(shuō): I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar. 如果是二者并列的,我們可以用一個(gè)超級(jí)句式: Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. 其它的短語(yǔ)可以用: besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover )轉(zhuǎn)折(拐彎抹角) 批評(píng)某人缺點(diǎn)的時(shí)候,我們總習(xí)慣先拐彎抹角說(shuō)說(shuō)他的優(yōu)點(diǎn),然后轉(zhuǎn)入正題,再說(shuō)缺點(diǎn),這種方式雖然陰險(xiǎn)了點(diǎn),可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。 1) first, second, third, last( 不推薦,原因:俗) 2) firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推薦,原因:俗) 3) the first, the second, the third, the last(不推薦,原因:俗) 4) in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推薦,原因:俗) 5) to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(強(qiáng)烈推薦) 6) to start with, next