【正文】 ager have a successful life?”的討論，為此你采訪了一些同學(xué)（結(jié)果見(jiàn)下表）。優(yōu)秀事跡上個(gè)月把零花錢(qián)捐給了希望工程未來(lái)夢(mèng)想1. 希望成為連接家鄉(xiāng)到上海路段的高鐵總工程師2. 每個(gè)人為保護(hù)環(huán)境都可以做一些改變。周末你和父母商議后，打算邀請(qǐng)她去老舍茶館。請(qǐng)用英文寫(xiě)一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：1．你在學(xué)?；蚣依镌?jīng)遇到的最大問(wèn)題或煩惱；2．你解決問(wèn)題或煩惱的過(guò)程；3．你的感想。Ladies and gentlemen,My name is Li Ming. I’m very glad to talk about my wonderful experience. Tianjin International Marathon________________________________________________________18．（山西農(nóng)業(yè)大學(xué)附屬學(xué)校中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)社會(huì)需要愛(ài)，時(shí)代呼喚愛(ài)。內(nèi)容包括:,談?wù)勎沂小皠?chuàng)文活動(dòng)”前后的情況（過(guò)去如何,現(xiàn)在如何）“創(chuàng)文活動(dòng)”出力提兩點(diǎn)建議。英語(yǔ)作文要注意人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)，注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過(guò)渡。注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫，豐富文章的文采。[高分句型二]Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.” 住在您們家里就像住在我自己的家里一樣，這讓我想起了一句話：“天下之大, 家最美好。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意郵件的格式，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要為第一、第三人稱(chēng)。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。10．I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believ解析：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.【解析】試題分析：英語(yǔ)教育網(wǎng)站開(kāi)展主題為“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論，采訪了一些同學(xué)參與討論，寫(xiě)出他們的觀點(diǎn)及自己的觀點(diǎn)。而He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。14．Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this解析：Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，我通過(guò)微信告訴Lucy要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何時(shí)何地見(jiàn)面。 Speaking解析：Good morning, everybody. I’m glad that I can share something aboutthe English Listening amp。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。13．Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for wo解析：Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think it’s a good idea. As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution. What’s more, it costs little to use them. However, some people park bikes in wrong places after they use them. Sometimes it’s hard to find a bike on the street. And bicycle accidents do happen once in a while, so we must be careful when riding. Never ride too fast and always follow the traffic rules. At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes. Don’t bring it home or keep it your own. What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，所寫(xiě)的句子應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法，不能是漢語(yǔ)式的句子，要使用一些高級(jí)詞匯及句式。作者根據(jù)題目要求就如何創(chuàng)建和諧班級(jí)發(fā)表了自己的看法。9．We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.As a member o解析：We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.As a member of the class, I respect and trust my teachers and classmates. When I have someproblems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. When some of my classmates are sad,I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.Of course, there is more that I should do. I’m really good at English, but some of myclassmates aren’t. I will help them. Then we’ll make progress together.【解析】這篇作文給出的寫(xiě)作背景是：你們學(xué)校英文報(bào)刊在以Building a Harmonious Class為題征文，你來(lái)為?？陡?，談一談如何創(chuàng)建一個(gè)和諧的班集體、你通常是怎么做的以及你還需要做什么。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。s best to do sth. 盡全力做某事； too much 太多。6．How to solve our stress?The entrance examination is ing .We will graduate soon . We all have so解析：How to solve our stress?The entrance examination is ing .We will graduate soon . We all have some problems and stress in our lives these days. How should we solve them?First, we should take an active part in exercise. Sports can help us to have a healthier body and study better. Second, we need to talk with our teachers, parents and friends. Let them know our trouble. They may give us some useful advice. Third, we can also listen to music and read books. They are good ways to relax ourselves. Fourth, we should try our best to study hard 。that等連詞的運(yùn)用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時(shí)語(yǔ)言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。4．Dear Tom,I am very happy to know that you won the first prize in the Chinese speech petition, s解析：Dear Tom,I am very happy to know that you won the first prize in the Chinese speech petition, so I’m writing to congratulate you on your wonderful performance.You did a good job in the Chinese speech petition. You pronounced really well during your speech and your voice was beautiful. You spoke so fluently that we all felt proud of you. What’s more, we were surprised at your rich and meaningful contents.As your best friend, I know you tried your best for the petition. You kept practicing your speech every day in order to make it better. I know it is important to keep on trying and never to give up. I hope I can be successful like you one day in the future.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含題目中所提供的所有信息。3．With more and more