【正文】 連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，特別注意了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不要逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，穿插并列句和復(fù)合句。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【參考答案】***試卷處理標(biāo)記，請(qǐng)不要?jiǎng)h除一、英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)1．A解析：As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don’t have enough munication with their family members .They may feel a little lonelyPersonally, there39。exercise to keep healthy and read booksDear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your . ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua19．書(shū)面表達(dá)在本周班會(huì)課上，同學(xué)們對(duì)“初中生什么時(shí)候放學(xué)比較合適？”這一問(wèn)題進(jìn)行了熱烈的討論。2. 介紹你平時(shí)鍛煉的情況：（1）每天鍛煉的時(shí)間：不到一個(gè)半小時(shí)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下所 給要點(diǎn),寫一篇 100 詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息，給 David寫一封電子郵件，告訴他討論的情況及你自己本人的計(jì)劃及原因。作為新時(shí)代的中學(xué)生, 如何響應(yīng)習(xí)主席的號(hào)召, 從“我”做起, 創(chuàng)建“綠色生活美麗家園”（Live Green, Live Better）? 請(qǐng)以此為題,參考以下要點(diǎn)（可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）, 為?？庇⒄Z(yǔ)角”寫一篇100詞左右的英文稿件。你認(rèn)為自己學(xué)習(xí)上還要多花工夫。，幫家長(zhǎng)做家務(wù)。目前數(shù)量在減少，因?yàn)椋?）人們砍伐森林，大象漸漸失去家園；2）人們捕殺大象，獲取象牙。 2．學(xué)生應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)做艱苦的工作。家規(guī)是中華民族傳統(tǒng)文化的重要組成部分。As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．書(shū)面表達(dá)（本題15分）根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請(qǐng)將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。為了使生活更美好，社會(huì)需要正能量（positive energy）。我們的國(guó)家主席習(xí)近平多次強(qiáng)調(diào)良好家風(fēng)家規(guī)的重要性。 3．學(xué)會(huì)理解和尊重清潔工人的勞動(dòng)。3）應(yīng)如何保護(hù)它們（不少于三條）。 （2）. 你的父母對(duì)你嚴(yán)格要求，但是也很關(guān)心你。參考要點(diǎn): 1保護(hù)自然，如：綠色低碳出行, 減少污染……2美化自然，如：讓天更藍(lán)山更綠水更清……3呼吁人人參與，從身邊小事做起，如：適度節(jié)約，拒絕浪費(fèi)……；做到人與自然的和諧。比例計(jì)劃原因50% 去國(guó)內(nèi)外旅游。13．書(shū)面表達(dá)根據(jù)下列表格的提示，寫一篇題為Changes in Our Hometown的英語(yǔ)短文．（80詞左右）文章內(nèi)容必須包含所給的所有信息．開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：過(guò)去現(xiàn)在1舊房1高樓2河水骯臟2河水清澈（clean and clear）．3步行、騎自行車上班3乘公交車、小汽車上班4道路狹窄（narrow）．4街道寬闊（wide），干凈整潔5居住條件（living；；；；（自主發(fā)揮,至少兩點(diǎn)）參考詞匯: civilized 文明的 make joint efforts 共同努力 obey 遵守16．書(shū)面表達(dá)隨著電子時(shí)代的到來(lái)，西方文化如潮水般涌來(lái)，中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的傳承面臨著巨大的挑戰(zhàn)。（2）偶爾不鍛煉的原因：作業(yè)多，沒(méi)時(shí)間。大部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為初中生應(yīng)該在5點(diǎn)左右放學(xué)，下表所列里大家的發(fā)言記錄。do what we want, such as listening to musics no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it39。為提升文章檔次，還應(yīng)注意使用高級(jí)句型和較復(fù)雜的句式。短文中使用了較豐富的句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there39?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。亮點(diǎn)句型：（1）A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自從我們學(xué)校讓學(xué)生做自愿勞動(dòng)以來(lái)，在學(xué)生中發(fā)生了一場(chǎng)激烈的爭(zhēng)論。提出倡議時(shí)可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建議的句子。所寫的句子要符合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如get good results, spend+時(shí)間+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。另外，一定要注意題目要求，把每一個(gè)信息都進(jìn)行比較，不要有漏掉。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人稱來(lái)敘述為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么；時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述建議時(shí)，描寫具體，條理清晰。而非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop believe that reading can increase ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。t be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.That39。13．C解析：Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more fortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【詳解】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。而I think it39。首先需要陳述正反兩方面的觀點(diǎn)，其次結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)，發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。句型：When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins；Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。對(duì)于城市A的缺點(diǎn)，作者用了“Although”盡管一詞輕輕帶過(guò)。重點(diǎn)語(yǔ)句：It is everyone’s duty to do something good to the environment around us保護(hù)環(huán)境是每個(gè)人的職責(zé)，make full use of充分利用， let’s take action!讓我們行動(dòng)起來(lái)9．C解析：例文In my