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really helpful. It can bring us more joy and provide us with useful suggestions.【解析】此篇書面表達(dá)的話題是“分享”。語(yǔ)法規(guī)范,用詞準(zhǔn)確,注意了名詞、動(dòng)詞、形容詞等的正確形式。句子的結(jié)構(gòu)要完整,可以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主,如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。注意:. ,句子連貫,條理清楚,書寫規(guī)范;2. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名或能夠透露你個(gè)人身份的相關(guān)信息。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài),注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題,不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下表格,在英語(yǔ)課上和同學(xué)談?wù)勀愕目捶?。Dear Sir or Madam,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Wu Hao【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,I’m writing to ask for your help about my family trip. My family is planning a trip to Beijing during the Spring Festival. We decide to travel by air, so we would like to know about flights to Beijing. Also, can you order three rooms in a good hotel? We want to know some information about places of interest in Beijing. You can contact me. My phone number is 8618399. Thanks for your help. Best wishes!Wu Hao【解析】【詳解】本文屬于應(yīng)用文體,向旅行社詢問(wèn)去北京的航班、酒店以及旅游景點(diǎn)。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。湖南省岳陽(yáng)開發(fā)區(qū)長(zhǎng)嶺中學(xué)中考模擬)時(shí)光荏苒,轉(zhuǎn)眼間你已經(jīng)成長(zhǎng)為一名即將步入高中的青少年。人物身份為同學(xué)白楊,介紹分四個(gè)要點(diǎn):她家境貧寒;她精心照顧患病母親;她學(xué)習(xí)刻苦,成績(jī)優(yōu)異;她關(guān)心同學(xué),樂(lè)于助人;她經(jīng)常利用空閑時(shí)間做志愿者工作。開頭介紹了我的個(gè)人情況,接下來(lái)介紹我們的校園,老師和同學(xué),最后對(duì)學(xué)校、老師、同學(xué)表達(dá)感謝和祝福。、老師、同學(xué)表達(dá)感謝和祝福?!驹斀狻?,確定寫作的目標(biāo),寫自己3年初中校園生活里難忘的人或事,描述難忘的人用第三人稱,講述過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情用一般過(guò)去時(shí),開頭和結(jié)尾一般性闡述,用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí);書寫時(shí)要圍繞中心“unforgettable”,敘述清楚具體的事件或情節(jié),文章結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰明了,注意短語(yǔ)、句型的正確使用。:注意書寫工整美觀整潔。語(yǔ)言要規(guī)范,時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確,敘述清楚條里,學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用。第三,我使用紙張的兩面。認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示要點(diǎn),確定主題,根據(jù)要點(diǎn)列出提綱,所寫內(nèi)容必須包括所有要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,語(yǔ)句通順,意思連貫,書寫規(guī)范。My lowcarbon lifeLowcarbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. ________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My lowcarbon lifeLowcarbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. First, I always go to school on foot and tell my parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, I save water and electricity by turning off the taps , fans。點(diǎn)睛:這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ),為文章增色不少,如:try one’s best。(英語(yǔ))中考英語(yǔ)英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)匯編易錯(cuò)剖析含解析一、中考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)匯編1.( What’s more, feel proud of; in order to; give up ;keep on trying. ; It is important to keep on trying and never to give up等;so ;so TV sets and lights in time when I don39。寫完以后,注意再讀一遍,看看有無(wú)單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤(時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等)。我認(rèn)為充分利用紙張是件好事。注意書寫的規(guī)范:大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。3.(,開頭句“regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers.”直入主題,正文部分詳細(xì)描述了老師如何耐心的多方面的幫助自己, is so kind and helpful that I can’t forget her in my school 。要求:1. 文章包含以上提示內(nèi)容,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。此處go by, e to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。人稱為第三人稱,時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。在你十幾年的人生旅途中,一定充滿了各種各樣的歡樂(lè)?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。要點(diǎn):AgreeSave time, protect the environmentDisagreeToo expensive, easily to fall into the games。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語(yǔ)意連貫。,信件的開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。為提升作文檔次,應(yīng)穿插使用并列句、復(fù)合句及其他復(fù)雜句式。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整,以簡(jiǎn)單句為主,也使用了并列句、賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句句型,調(diào)整了文章節(jié)奏,提升了作文檔次。首先我們根據(jù)給出的圖表確定要寫的內(nèi)容的提綱,包括:分享什么?為什么分享?怎么分享?然后根據(jù)每個(gè)提綱給出的一些關(guān)鍵詞,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)可能用到的表達(dá),拓展思維,寫出自己的看法。假設(shè)你班對(duì)此進(jìn)行了一次班級(jí)討論,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)討論主題并結(jié)合所給信息,以“Be a Beautiful City”為題寫一份發(fā)言稿,號(hào)召?gòu)V大學(xué)生為建設(shè)美好城市作貢獻(xiàn)。點(diǎn)睛:這是一篇材料作文,根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容可知用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),可把提示內(nèi)容結(jié)合實(shí)際展開合理的想象,把它們拓展成一個(gè)個(gè)英文句子。參考詞匯:sidewalk 人行道 zebracrossing 斑馬線___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】With more and more cars ing into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents。點(diǎn)睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。Dear Peter, I’m Li ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Xin【答案】Dear Peter, I’m Li hear you are ing to Beijing to visit the Palace Museum .Let me introduce it to is also called Purple Forbidden City. It is the largest and most well reserved imperial residence in China was built in 1406. It took 14 years to build the Forbidden City. The first ruler who actually lived here was Ming Emperor visitors from the world visit it every day. In 1987,the United Nations Educational,Scientific and Cultural Organization recognized the Forbidden City was a World Heritage,the largest ancient palace in the all like think you will also like am looking forward to ing soon.Yours, Li Xin【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文,要求寫一封電子郵件給你的新外教Peter,向他介紹北京故宮博物院。全國(guó)中考模擬)三年的初中生活接近尾聲,回首過(guò)去你充滿依戀,展望未來(lái)你豪情滿懷。英語(yǔ)作文,要忠實(shí)于材料,不必?cái)U(kuò)展,注意用好連詞,多用非謂語(yǔ),慎用較難的句型,一定不能寫錯(cuò)句。要求是給七年級(jí)新生的學(xué)習(xí)生活提幾點(diǎn)建議,所以人稱主要用第二人稱,時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 要求: 80100; ; ,不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。第二段對(duì)原因進(jìn)行了闡述,借助了first,second,third等詞使得原因的陳述連貫起來(lái)。觀點(diǎn)理由不想有弟妹,愿意當(dāng)獨(dú)生子女(21%)不愿意與別人分享父母的愛,父母會(huì)很辛苦,......想要弟妹,不愿意當(dāng)獨(dú)生子女(62%) 渴望有伴,有更多的親人,有人分享......不介意,都可以(17%) ……你的觀點(diǎn)……要求:文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和學(xué)校名稱,100字左右,開頭已給出,不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)。本文恰當(dāng)使用了had a discussion about,share parents’ love with,because of,play with, however,also, be good to等詞(組)?!敬鸢浮緿ear students,I39。其次,開始具體陳述觀點(diǎn),陳述的時(shí)候要適當(dāng)使用實(shí)例,相關(guān)用到的短語(yǔ)有have some difficulties in doing在做…的時(shí)候有困難,review the knowledge復(fù)習(xí)知識(shí),think over the difficulties來(lái)回思考難點(diǎn),Little by little一點(diǎn)一點(diǎn)地。參考詞匯:知識(shí) knowledge, 社會(huì)活動(dòng) social activities_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The summer holiday is ing. I39。d like to go to Beijing for a visit of the Great Wall.;6. I39。(3)列好提綱和要點(diǎn),及需要的重要短語(yǔ)或句型。外貌 圓臉,笑瞇