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ppeals to me by its extensive and profound far as I’m concerned, the relationship between finance and economy is akin to that between blood and as the physical conditions can be reflected from the circulation of blood according to the Chinese medicine, the economic operation of a country can be judged from its financial status, funds flow, exposures to the professional courses of Money and Banking, Corporate Financing, Macro/Micro Economics, Econometrics, International Finance, and Insurance as well as the mathematical courses such as Mathematical Analysis, Advanced Algebra, Probability Theory and Mathematical Statistics have enabled me to lay a solid academic foundation of , bearing in mind sound interpersonal skills and handson ability are the basic personal qualities required of a successful financial person, I availed myself of various opportunities to undertake began to invest in the stock market in face of the frustrations at the outset, I audited all the courses of security analysis and investment on campus, read a lot of financial magazines and newspapers and consulted some professors and my was uplifted during such a process, not only in money making, but also in grasping the principles and regulations behind the stock value my experiences in conducting research programs which acted as bridges linking my theoretical knowledge with the larger world where it would be importantly, I got much enlightenment and inspiration from making presentations, like my presentations regarding the parison and analysis of appreciations of Yuan and Yen along with the cases of these presentations, I tried to arrive at flexible and prehensive mand of plicated , I derived selfconfidence and sense of joy in immersing myself in the fields where my interests genuinely other unique assets are attributed to my internships in different units where finance invariably plays an important I worked in China Foreign Exchange and Trade Centre, I gained a full understanding of the trading systems of mercial banks and raised my own proposals which were soon adopted about their function , I found a trader’s work busy but interesting, which allowed me to see my own strength and weakness gauged with the had my professional skills and teamwork spirit honed during my internship in People’s Bank of China where I learned about the functions of the central bank and my prominent performance won recognition from the persons in charge , my onthespot investigations in a goalApplicant for Finance Program from Renmin University of Chinamine enterprise and a copper mine enterprise allowed me to see other fields where finance matters tremendously through my exposure to the financial conditions, profit resources and development trends of the experiences, bined with my bountiful extracurricular activities such as the volunteer position of Beijing 2008 Olympic Games, involvement in organizing exhibitions and shows have prompted me to set my own career goals—pared to the research work, I prefer a more practical I have learned to focus on the way to achieving my goals—to pursue more advanced education in America, the ideal place full of practical opportunities regarding finance and economy as a have long admired your esteemed university for its significant achievements in the teaching and research of program of finance, with its wellstructured curriculum, highlyproductive faculty as well as a multitude of realworld projects matches my academic background and interest hope to work in a worldclass financial institution or a transnational enterprise after the pletion of my master program and your diverse student body and strong alumni work will no doubt bee a stepping stone leading me to my career prepared and determined, I’m convinced that your university is precisely my starting 第四篇:如何寫留學申請的個人陳述美國留學申請如何寫個人陳述什么是個人陳述個人陳述是在申請過程中按照學校要求來寫一篇有關申請人背景,學術成就和未來研究和職業(yè)目標的文章。而西方的大學并不單是通過傳統(tǒng)的考試來考評其申請者的資格,這并不是說他們的錄取標準不嚴格。不要像列清單,也不要重覆申請表格已有的資料。4.”I am attracted to your department by its brilliant faculty.“應說明對於教授的認知是從何而來,如在何處讀到某教授的文章而愿受教于他,或某位教授正在從事一項重要研究,與自己欲攻讀的研究領域相同等。重要的是給學校一個專業(yè),認真的印象。s what admissions staff wants to your essay with an attentiongrabbing leadan anecdote, quote, question, or engaging description of your essay with a conclusion that refers back to lead and restates your your essay at。(六)態(tài)度誠懇認真,不卑不亢。2.”I received extensive training in physics“ 這句話不夠詳細,”My training was in the area of particle physics“就具體多了。這不僅僅對中國人如此,以英語為母語的人在此類寫作時也會感到十分的頭疼,但是我們中國人還需克服語言的障礙。這對申請者來說是一個絕好的機會。nonessential economy began to play an important role in the world, the development of information industry made finance market develop more , finance influenced largely on the daily life of mon people and made mon people more concern the development tendency of finance then before and made out the relevant reaction according to getting information from all aspects, for example, the change of inflation, stock and exchange rate that influenced mon peoples(people’s)lives and economical began to realize that finance in fact was the different(difference)between microcosmic and microeconomic and macroeconomic knowledge through mylearning in the university, and it owned strong practice and was not abstract instance, currency banking, investment and international finance offered many cases and made me realize the meaning of I knew that finance covered a wider scope and researcher needed strong academic background and ability on macrocontrol by practices and analysis of example, I acted as a leader of group, each group represents an enterprise and discussed whether open new produces instead of old produces, I told every member to answer for a part and consult materials, then we talked about them together and found some materials had superposition and didn’t have close logic, even each member had different emphasis and expressions which made me know cooperation was very important in a I held the second meeting to talk abou