【正文】 o drawbacks, our project could have been much better and more , following are two of my suggestions: next time we have similar activities, try to start earlier, say in the this case we can put in more also, as we are getting along, we can put up some posters to tell people what we are doing and call their attention to environment ．圖表作文A： staying at home B: traveling C: doing social investigation D: other waysFrom the two charts, we can see that in the past ten years the students who go traveling and do social investigations during vacations have increased greatly while those who stay at home have decreased a are several reasons for the , with the development of economy, many people have bee better can get financial support from their parents for , tourism has greatly developed over the past ten new scenic spots have been built and addition, the students today are expected and encouraged to participate in facing the real this way they can obtain the necessary experiences required when they go jobhunting upon the changes in the charts, we can predict that more and more college students will make their vacations interesting and worthwhile by going to the outside world instead of staying at : For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Studying should write at leastwords following the outline given bellow:四級(jí)?？紖⒖挤段模篟ecent years have witnessed a phenomenon that more and more students swarm into foreign countries to finish their have not considered our homeland as the unique place to enrich their knowledge any , some excellent boys and girls whose financial condition is fine simultaneously began to pay their attention on some oversea prestigious colleges and institutions and dream to get degrees are several reasons to cause this of all, with the globalization and much more frequent munications with developed countries, most of the people in China get to realize the wide gaps in many fields, especially in science and technology,between China and western thirst for studying aboard to get ready better for the fierce petition in the jobhunting , the life in foreign countries is usually attractive to young people and studying aboard may satisfy their , the rapid development of our mother country and the remarkable growth in our ine make going abroad to study available, which is almost impossible to average Chinese students in the moveout of our students changes our society a one hand, being students in foreign universities will widen their view and offer them more possibility to get favorite consequently their success will draw more lateers to do the same the other hand, if the majority of them will not go back to China to work in the future, our fatherland will probably suffer a significant loss which may be difficult to be estimated by Studying Abroad or Home(1)現(xiàn)在有越來越多的人想出國留學(xué)?！痉段摹緼 Letter of ApologyDear ，①I am writing to apologize for my late paper which you have ②assigned to us last Monday was ③due this Friday, but to my regret, I haven?t even started it feel really sorry for not handing in the paper on time and ④for the inconvenience it would bring to have caught a serious cold last week and the doctor asked me to stay in bed for a week since I was very weak and the weather was very cold these , I couldn?t go to the library to get the necessary ①referential information which was needed for my a result of this, I have not started writing the paper yet and could not hand it in on I have finally fully will finish the paper as soon as I can and ①try my best to hand in homework on time in the yours，Li Ming◇第一段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：表明歉意◇語言點(diǎn)提示：① I am writing to apologize(say sorry)for :道歉信的常用開頭句式② assign: 分配，指定，布置③ due；到期的，預(yù)期的④ I?m sorry for the inconvenience it would bring to you: 另一句常用句式◇第二段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：解釋原因，雖然不是真的給人道歉，但是理由還是要充分的好。The topic of ①（主題）is being more and more popular are two sides of opinions of people say A is their hold their view for the reason of ②（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③（理由二）Moreover, ④(理由三)While others think that B is a better choice in the following three ,(支B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥（理由二）Thirdly(finally),⑦(理由三).From my point of view,Ithink ⑧（我的觀點(diǎn)）The reason is that ⑨(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my me, the former is surely a wise ，要求考生反對(duì)這一觀點(diǎn)Some people believe that ①（觀點(diǎn)一）.For example, they think ②（舉例說明）．And it will bring them ③(為他們帶來的好處).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the one thing,④(我不同意該看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤(反對(duì)的理由之二)．Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥(我對(duì)文章所討論主題的看法)．二、闡述主題題型要求從一句話或一個(gè)主題出發(fā)，按照提綱的要求進(jìn)行論述。另一些人認(rèn)為。這是一封道歉信，寫的時(shí)候要遵循道歉信的一般模式：開篇直奔主題，然后說明原因，最后提出可能的補(bǔ)救措施。例如：Only by the coefforts of the whole society could “green campus” work smoothly and bring benefit to people’s wellbeings中使用倒裝句的結(jié)構(gòu)，凸顯考生的語法功底。The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green construction refers to green environment preservation and protection。(二)草擬提綱Topic: Creating A Green CampusQuestion: What’s a green campus and how to create a green campus?Outline:Creating A Green Campus the topic of a green campus has aroused public is of vital importance to the students has a profound impact on society idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment preservation and protection civilized atmosphere for students’ mental health is imperative for us to take effective measures to create a green law and regulations should be worked out the awareness of the students themselves(三)落筆寫作：根據(jù)題目中的提綱，首先強(qiáng)調(diào)建立綠色校園的重要性，最好在此句之前做一個(gè)鋪墊，介紹建立綠色校園受到人們廣泛關(guān)注這一背景信息，即the topic of a green campus has aroused public 。這一步主要檢查段落是否完善，中心是否突出，段內(nèi)各句是否銜接緊湊等。在這一過程中，以所擬定的提綱為指導(dǎo)，把提綱中要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容通過一些過渡手段將其連接成完整的文章。還要從題目中找出關(guān)鍵詞，判斷該題目含概內(nèi)容以及側(cè)重點(diǎn)是什么。English plays an important role in our life。二、造句英文寫作中一個(gè)重要的創(chuàng)作規(guī)律就是追求語言的豐富多變，在文章中除了詞的多變以外，我們還可以豐富句型句式。在這里必須指明的是，并不是詞匯等級(jí)越高越好，必須還要考慮到適合于不同的語境。最后一步是篩選出最佳寫作思路從而達(dá)到文章“寫得好”的目的。關(guān)于文章內(nèi)容一、認(rèn)真審題，確保文章內(nèi)容正確當(dāng)考生看到一個(gè)文章題目的