【正文】 for example, the change of inflation, stock and exchange rate that influenced mon peoples(people’s)lives and economical began to realize that finance in fact was the different(difference)between microcosmic and microeconomic and macroeconomic knowledge through mylearning in the university, and it owned strong practice and was not abstract instance, currency banking, investment and international finance offered many cases and made me realize the meaning of I knew that finance covered a wider scope and researcher needed strong academic background and ability on macrocontrol by practices and analysis of example, I acted as a leader of group, each group represents an enterprise and discussed whether open new produces instead of old produces, I told every member to answer for a part and consult materials, then we talked about them together and found some materials had superposition and didn’t have close logic, even each member had different emphasis and expressions which made me know cooperation was very important in a I held the second meeting to talk about these asked all members to look for materials relevant to this case respectively and then analyzed them the process, we thought about them deeply and fully, finally we got a best this experiment, I became lover finance major th。完成的文件最好由母語(yǔ)人士進(jìn)行修改。結(jié)構(gòu)簡(jiǎn)單，銜接緊密，主線明確，便于理解“Simple is the best ”請(qǐng)記住，招生人員每天要讀大量的申請(qǐng)資料，只有那種簡(jiǎn)單有力重點(diǎn)突出的的文章才能打動(dòng)招生人員。筆者將其改為：我喜歡思考，如何讓事物運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)得更有效率。美國(guó)大學(xué)的招生人員曾談到：在留學(xué)申請(qǐng)旺季時(shí)，面對(duì)堆堆積如山的文件，一般他們審查一個(gè)PS的時(shí)間只有2，3分鐘，那種長(zhǎng)篇大論類的PS只能讓人心生厭煩。留學(xué)文書在西方的文化背景下是申請(qǐng)入學(xué)(獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金)的極為重要的組成部分。所謂留學(xué)文書，如PS，推薦信，RP(Research proposal),CV 等是一套文件系統(tǒng)，用以向錄取院校從各個(gè)角度展現(xiàn)您的求學(xué)動(dòng)機(jī)，學(xué)術(shù)學(xué)習(xí)能力，工作和研究經(jīng)歷，結(jié)合一系列更“客觀”，可量化的指標(biāo)：如 GRE，TOEFL，IELTS，GPA，等構(gòu)成您的全貌。很多中國(guó)申請(qǐng)人試圖把自己的方方面面的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和成績(jī)展示出來(lái)，須知PS不是簡(jiǎn)歷的詳細(xì)補(bǔ)充，許多信息可以通過(guò)其它文件展示，(如學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)等)。如筆者曾經(jīng)修改過(guò)一份申請(qǐng) CS(計(jì)算機(jī)專業(yè))的PS，原文用了數(shù)百字描述他如何開展班級(jí)工作的經(jīng)歷。這樣既突出了個(gè)性，又緊扣申請(qǐng)CS專業(yè)應(yīng)具有的嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)南到y(tǒng)思維能力這一重要素質(zhì)體現(xiàn)了出來(lái)。這種中國(guó)學(xué)院英語(yǔ)，其實(shí)經(jīng)常讓外國(guó)教授難以理解或是看后笑得前仰后合。multinational trade species and the scale, to make finance innovative appeared, strengthen international capital function and to play an important role on the resource distribution in the the munication among nations increase and the technology information development, the development of finance tends to globalization is the motor of economy globalization, finance and economy was one of the important factors for holding for the whole world, information, technology and other industry were developed on the base of finance and economy strength of a nation decided its place in the the future, the world finance market would present themselves with different styles。it makes me feel I am growing as a person and gives me a great sense of grandfather was a respected professor at a prestigious university prior to the Cultural Revolution and both my parents are senior engineers who graduated from the best university in we were never rich by any means, my parents always made it a priority to take me to museums, bookstores, and famous colleges in their spare loved reading stories about famous scientists, especially those who persisted in their theories no matter how difficult the atmosphere in my house was one that allowed me to cultivate my mind and find my decision to major in accounting came from my threeyear term as the treasurer of my high school I was responsible for recording, archiving receipts, making the annual budget, and collecting and refunding money for job transformed me into a patient and organized person who wanted to learn more about financial 2001, I enrolled as an accounting student at the(college name).(college name)is one of the most petitive universities in China and my time there taught me a lot about the spirit of hard of my last three years at the university I was awarded a level 3 scholarship as an outstanding graduation my major GPA was a which ranked me among the top 15 percent of my prove my accounting sense and financial management capability I postponed my graduate education and accepted a position as an auditor at(accounting firm name)Beijing my 4year employment there I had the opportunity to experience the full range of planning, auditing, and my duties there were:(1)the designing of suitable audit methods for clients,(2)using procedures to exam and analyze accounts,(3)evaluating the fairness of financial statements and reports,(4)and providing remendations regarding improving operations and financial positions of largest client when I was with(accounting firm name)was(pany name).I worked as an auditor of their IPO program and on the first annual audit after of the things I am most proud of is the Revenue and Cost recognition model I created while I was was based on the percentageofpletion method and could check for inconsistencies within the data, calculate the revenue of projects, and exam clients’ bination results when there are model was adopted as the major tool for the entire team of auditors(approximately 100)and to my knowledge is still used in(pany name’s)audit team work there not only confirmed my petence in the accounting field, but also trained me into a diligent and persevering than 50% of my clients were new clients, meaning we had no records in our database to refer challenge of starting from the very beginning is stressful and exciting at the same found myself extremely motivated when I had the authority to design procedures and make feeling of success and confidence I gained from serving new clients is the main reason why I stayed with the(pany name)team for 20 work there gave me a great sense of selfsatisfaction and was recognized by my peers and was rewarded for my hard work by being one of the top paid employees at my level during my last three years of working as an auditor, the thing that interested me most is the conversion between different experience of serving publicly listed panies in China, Hong Kong, and the US made me realize there are many theoretical differences between PRC GAAP, IFRS, and US accounting principles adopted by different countries not only