【正文】 are,the clearer the sky is,the greener the hills when we have the idea of loving our environment can we make a better place to everyone,let’s take action!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求寫一篇關(guān)于如何響應(yīng)習(xí)主席的號召, 從“我”做起, 創(chuàng)建“綠色生活美麗家園”的文章。避免漢語式英語。本文大部分都是復(fù)雜句，顯示了作者比較熟練的英語寫作水平。m writing to tell you something about our discussion today.The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends. I39。m glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it39。恰當(dāng)?shù)闹V語也為文章增色不少，例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧這個諺語?！军c睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢。寫作亮點：首先用一個自然段來闡明寫作的主題，表達(dá)出自己的觀點（認(rèn)為作業(yè)是很必要的），可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…這樣的句型。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。以及狀語從句等；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當(dāng)運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。在比較的時候，作者用了多種方式，使句子不單調(diào)，比如在比較溫度時，直接用比較級“higher”在說旅館時用了“l(fā)ess fortable ”，比較食物時，用了“as…as”等。雖然字?jǐn)?shù)要求不多，但可以很好地考查考生英語寫作的基本功，需要考生對常用的英語句型熟練掌握。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。構(gòu)思提綱?？键c：考查提綱作文。6．H解析：My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous , I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.I39。5．D解析：Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants. I believe everyone39。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。構(gòu)思提綱。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。2．A解析：In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others’ help. I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine.”（113w）【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述對節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法、發(fā)生在你身上正能量的事件以及鼓勵大家相互幫助，并讓世界充滿正能量。文章分為三段，第一段是題目中已經(jīng)給出的，因此了文章的話題。題目中給出了一個表格，里面包括了支持搶紅包這個游戲的人們的觀點以及反對這個游戲的人們的觀點和理由，只給了一些短語，我們需要組織語言，將這些要點用正確的英語表達(dá)出來，并使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整。你打算邀請外教 Peter參加。at 4:452. 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫。要點包括: 1. 變化是什么?2. 變化是如何發(fā)生的?3. 變化后有什么感受?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________18．書面表達(dá)假如你是九年級學(xué)生李華，你的美國筆友Billy發(fā)來郵件詢問你平時鍛煉的情況。Dear Bill,Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua15．書面表達(dá)“小手拉大手,同做文明人。一直以來，同學(xué)們對作業(yè)持有不同的觀點。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勎覀兠媾R的主要環(huán)境問題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望。 （2）. 第2要點和第3要點要用2—3句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 象牙ivoryDear classmates_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I believe everyone39。 注意：1．短文應(yīng)包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯； 2．不少于80詞。Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that