【正文】 的形式，給我們對比的家鄉(xiāng)的過去和現(xiàn)在，我們應用正確的英語將這些內(nèi)容表達出來，并對將來提出兩點希望。污染嚴重，垃圾遍地。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點；且文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明確，意思表達清楚、明了。Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給自己的英國筆友寫信，告訴他關于家鄉(xiāng)霧霾的情況。其次要注意使用正確的時態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可知，這篇短文應使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，謂語動詞用原形，特別要注意謂語動詞形式要變化，這是一個寫作的難點。動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系。每年春節(jié)，每個孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢（lucky money）。t have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Internet． In my opinion，our school can have aReading Weekonce a term．Teachers should encourage students to borrow books from the library．We must spend more time reading some useful books．As a result，we can have a better future． Let39。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。每周花七個多小時閱讀各種類型的書，因為……。s health.（優(yōu)勢） However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（難題） In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（建議）【解析】【詳解】這篇短文內(nèi)容豐富，表達了所有要點，語言表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。（英語）英語書面表達試題類型及其解題技巧一、英語書面表達1． 如今，很多城市出現(xiàn)了一種綠色出行方式――共享單車（bikesharing），它因環(huán)保、便捷而備受青睞，但同時也引發(fā)了一些問題。s helpful to people39。基本情況張陽，陽光中學九年級二班學生興趣愛好1. 喜歡閱讀?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。t have enough time for reading．Moreover，some of us don39。4．書面表達根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞的變化。首先應注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點，并注意表達的層次和條理。參考詞匯：霧霾haze注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；2. 語言通順，句子連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3. 詞數(shù)80左右，信件的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者根據(jù)題目要求介紹了自己家鄉(xiāng)治理霧霾的情況，并結(jié)合自身的實際情況，講述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。過去生活條件差，道路狹窄，房屋破舊。Changes my hometownMy hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to e to my hometown. Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tourists from all o