【正文】 ad that you are ing to learn Chinese here. I’ve already found you a house near our school. I’d like to tell you something about it.You may get on bus at Fang Cao Street and the next stop is just Jian Xin Chinese School. The house is near the school. It is about 25 square metres. In the bedroom, there is a bed, a sofa standing against the wall and a table near the window. You may find a light on the table and a chair next to it. There are two other rooms connecting the bedroom. The left one is a bathroom and the right one is a kitchen. So you may cook by yourself. The rent for the house is 500 yuan per month. Hope you’ll enjoy staying here!Yours,Li Hua總分值理由本文內(nèi)容詳細(xì)，詳略得當(dāng)，表述方式特別有制造力和新意，長(zhǎng)短句并用，語言構(gòu)造富于變化，參差有致，順暢圓潤(rùn)，尤其是情態(tài)動(dòng)詞和分詞的運(yùn)用特別獨(dú)到，為文章增色不少。一、如何提建議—— 給交友有困難的同學(xué)提建議I am sorry you are having trouble in making friends.【引出建議】Here are some tips to help you.【列舉建議】First, why not go and talk to people standing on their own. I agree this is difficult but that person may be lonely too. If you do this, I am sure you will soon have a new friend. Second, you can begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes,【理由】which will make you find people with the same interests. Finally, you should try to join in a discussion, 【理由】letting people know how friendly you are. I hope you will find these ideas useful.二、列舉個(gè)例 —— 良好飲食適應(yīng)As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s important for us to form healthy eating habits. However, some students have formed a variety of bad eating habits, such as not having breakfast, loving eating snacks, being particular about food, eating and drinking too much and so on, which will surely do harm to their health. To keep healthy, we should have healthy diets. Not only should we have various foods, like fish, meat, vegetables, fruits as well as rice, noodles, but also we should have the foods regularly and properly. Personally, I think it is important to keep a healthy diet, which contributes to building up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.三、舉例說明 —— 和諧師生關(guān)系對(duì)你的阻礙【要證明的觀點(diǎn)】Actually, having a good relationship with teachers makes it easier for us to get along smoothly with our study at school. 【引出例子】Take me for example. 【例子】My teacher is my good friend. When I fail in the exam, it is my teacher that first helps m to analyze the problem. She is patient enough to make me get over all the difficulties in my study. When I am unhappy she always listens to me carefully and then gives me some reasonable suggestions, so that I can focus on my study soon. Also, I have learned to be helpful and considerate. 【重申主題】But for(要不是) the good relationship with my teachers, I could not have made such progress.套語背誦 is no denying that confidence plays an important role in our life.A convincing example that jumps into my mind is about speaking English. example can be seen easily in our daily life. A good case in point is ?如此的例子在生活中特別容易見到，一個(gè)特別好的例子確實(shí)是??四、討論或辯論 —— 禁止乞丐在地下人行道行氣留宿【引出主題】Recently, Guangzhou has passed a law to ban beggars from begging and sleeping in the subways and our class had a discussion about it last Monday.【反對(duì)及其理由】56% of the students don’t agree with the idea because they think some beggars really have difficulty in making a living and have to play music in the subway to survive.【贊成及其理由】However, 44% of the students favour the idea because they think beggars bring a lot of trouble for the city. What’s more, some beggars are just taking advantage of people’s passion to make easy money.【個(gè)人看法】Personally, I think it is a good idea to forbid beggars in public places and we should take some measures to help them.五、利弊比照 —— 網(wǎng)購的利弊【點(diǎn)明主題】Nowadays many people prefer to shop on line. 【羅列好處】Generally, its advantages can be seen