【正文】 re trying to teach。t get caught the first time usually cheats again, not only because he/she is farther behind, but also because it seems “easier.” This slippery slope of eroding ethics and bigger risks leads only to , the cheater gets caught, and the later he/she gets caught, the worse the have been dismissed from school because they didn39。t considered what might go consequences of getting caught are serious, and may include a “0” on a test or assignment。m just checking my answers, not copying.” We must be honest about our actions, and avoid we fool ourselves into believing we39。t make responsible identify risks, we need to know the rules and be aware of the example, one who doesn39。第二段作者則進一步深入分析該話語，指出做某事在短期看來很容易，長期來看，恰恰相反，人們做事的結果也因此總是失敗，原因則在最后一句點出：缺乏毅力。總體上來看，文章思路清晰，采用了生動的比喻和形象的心理描寫，語言流暢，用語地道?！舅募墝懽髟掝}可用句型】 開頭：1With the rapid growth of......, more and more people choose to.......Nowadays, it is monly ○believed that.......will provides them with many opportunities, but I wonder that people who........are facing more the backdrop of an era characterized with opportunities, the living pressures of people ○has been , every individual who.......faces various :1There are numerous challenges of......, and I would explore only three challenges here.○The first challenge is that......The second one is that the......The last one is that......2As far as I am concerned, there are three main challenges of.......○First of all,......In addition,......At last but not least,......結尾：1Based on the points discussed above, we may reasonably draw the conclusion that there are ○many challenges of......Dealing with the challenges is not different from conquering a great mountain。話題2：出國留學面臨的挑戰(zhàn)，可以從以下三方面進行闡述。整體難度較去年來看，難度不大。一次性塑料袋帶來的問題。s of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws accordance with the rapid growth of online in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being ：本次四級作文探討的是最近的熱點話題之一——互聯(lián)網(wǎng)網(wǎng)購。下面說一下這篇文章的有待提高之處：，能看得出該同學試圖采用議論文的“三段式”（提出問題、分析問題、解決問題）。re allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by menting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the ’ve done it hundreds of time.”You39。寫好本篇作文的關鍵在于緊跟題目所列提綱：現(xiàn)象——原因——看法和建議，確定相應的寫作結構。注意要加上所謂邏輯關系詞。第一是文章的結構。大家發(fā)現(xiàn)這道題從審題的難度來講基本長沒有什么難度，基本上是初中、小學詞匯，題干不會出現(xiàn)什么問題。第一篇：大學英語四級作文真題解析大學英語四級作文真題解析四級的題型包括論說文、說明文、記敘文?！癏ow to”題型已經(jīng)考過三次，重點在如何(how)，也就是說我們重點是方法。我們在寫作文的時候分三個層次，總分總的原則，第一自然段我們一定要進行引題部分，第二是分析，第三是總結。比如三個方法，或者是三個建議的措施，三個原因，三個危害等等。重點分析產(chǎn)生此現(xiàn)象的原因有哪些，把最重要的兩三點羅列下來。d write at least 120 words but no more than 180 :。但是，以“With the development of the Internet”為開首語，有些落入俗套，有硬套模板的嫌疑。目前網(wǎng)購的風靡程度是眾所周知，因此，考生對于該話題還是比較熟悉的。限制一次性塑料袋的意義。接下來，文都四六級輔導老師將四級的三個作文給大家進行一下剖析。首先，對于外國的文化或者風俗不了解，無法融入當?shù)氐纳罨蛘邔W習群體。both of us require determination, courage, and All in all, there is no doubt that people who......are in front of many is the ○critical time that the government/the society/ we took effective actions to cope with these ，學生對畢業(yè)后創(chuàng)業(yè)、出國留學以及大城市的生活還是非常的了解的，所以在內容方面應該有很多點可以寫，上述的話題思路僅供參考。但一些重復表達（如第二段和第三段中的weak will）顯得單調，可用shaky ones, weakwilled persons，the strongwilled等靈活表達。第三段作者進一步給出了自己的觀點，告訴大家如何避免陷入這種兩難境地：首要條件即需要堅強的意志和長期的堅持。t know the rules about plagiarism may accidentally use words or ideas without giving proper credit, or one who fails to keep careful research notes may unintentionally fail to quote and cite sources as the fact that such a violation is “unintentional” does not excuse the is not a defense.“But Everybody Does It”Most people who get in trouble do know the rules and facts, but manage to fool themselves about the risks they39。re not doing anything wrong, we can39。an “F” in the class。t get this simple message: Honesty is the ONLY policy that Hurts Others, TooCheaters often feel invisible, as if their actions “don39。all I care about is stealing a grade, regardless of the effect on others.” The and destructive attack on the quality of your , cheating can hurt the reputation of the University, and harm those who worked hard for their Integrity MattersIf cheating bees the norm, then we are in big must rely on the honesty and good faith of others every not, we couldn39。m not interested in what you39。t learn from the test, depriving him/herself of an undermines confidence and independence: the cheater is a fraud, and knows that without dishonesty, he/she would have destroys selfesteem and integrity, leaving the cheater ashamed, guilty, and afraid of getting of all, a cheater who doesn39。s in it for me”), and simply haven39。s not cheating because I39。re taking, we can39。范文開頭第一句即一針見血地對上述幽默性話語做出總結性概括，即戒煙看似簡單實則很難，隨后指出該話語本質上是一個悖論，并且以一個“水滴石穿”的俗語來指出困難所在，這句也是本文的一個亮點，體現(xiàn)作者在西方俗語方面豐富的知識儲備。本文先點題指出“堅強意志”的重要性；第二段從反面舉例闡述——具體描寫了意志不堅定者的心理活動，闡述為什么會戒煙失?。蛔詈髲慕錈熝由斓缴钪械钠渌虑?，并復述堅強意志的內涵，點題收尾。最后，在大城市生活，如果身邊沒有朋友，會很孤獨。第三，如果威脅到現(xiàn)有企業(yè)的利益，會遭到現(xiàn)有企業(yè)的阻撓。這次的四級作文共有三個話題，且都是要求圍繞著“挑戰(zhàn)”進行書寫。2010年12月大學英語四級考試How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?, 父母應該……Nowadays, an increasing number of families in China have only one parents love and care for children so much as to help children deal with every , children get used to depending on their parents in everything and lack the ability to solve problems are some effective ways for parents to help their children to be start with, parents should give their children more chances to experience the world and life around their children can enhance the capability to overe the difficulties and handle problems addition, parents should offer enough assistance when their children need this way, they depend on their parents in a right way and can solve problems independently when they face the same one next but not least, parents should allowtheir children to make decisions the above discussion, I strongly believe that parents should help their children to be independent by instructing them in a proper way rather than planning and considering everything for Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling(