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【正文】 . All of us would agree that in order to be successful in the presentday society, we university students have to possess certain personal qualities that enable us to realize our aims. What do you think is the most important personal quality of a university student? Write a position of about 400 words on the following topic: The Most Important Personal Quality of A University Student In the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement, and in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. Write your position on Answer Sheet Four. 2. 體裁說(shuō)明文和議論文為主，三段式為主。3. 話題范圍教育，網(wǎng)絡(luò)，個(gè)人品格與成功，個(gè)人與整體關(guān)系，學(xué)生經(jīng)商，求職面試，理想追求，經(jīng)濟(jì)地位與友誼，大學(xué)生活等。c. 對(duì)文章結(jié)構(gòu)，評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)或答題方式進(jìn)行說(shuō)明。a. 收集相關(guān)知識(shí)b. 收集相關(guān)話題的觀點(diǎn)c. 收集相關(guān)話題的論據(jù)d. 收集相關(guān)話題的表達(dá)二． 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1. 思想表達(dá)滿分10分，極差12，較差34，一般56，良好78，優(yōu)秀910思想內(nèi)容內(nèi)容切題 1分內(nèi)容充實(shí) 1分觀點(diǎn)明確 1分論據(jù)支持論點(diǎn) 1分有獨(dú)到見(jiàn)解 （額外加）表達(dá)效果表達(dá)清晰流暢 有說(shuō)服力 篇章組織結(jié)構(gòu)每段有主題句 1分句間銜接自然 1分段間過(guò)渡自然 1分第一部分明確提出觀點(diǎn) 1分最后一部分自然得出結(jié)論 1分段落排列自然合理 （額外加）2. 語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力8分，極差12，較差3，一般45，良好67，優(yōu)秀8準(zhǔn)確性語(yǔ)法正確 2分句子結(jié)構(gòu)正確 1分 固定搭配正確/習(xí)語(yǔ)正確/用詞準(zhǔn)確 1分豐富性詞匯豐富 1分 （關(guān)鍵詞用同義詞，近義詞，反義詞替代）句子形式豐富 1分 （長(zhǎng)短結(jié)合，主被動(dòng)結(jié)合，簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句結(jié)合，最好有虛擬語(yǔ)氣，強(qiáng)調(diào)結(jié)構(gòu)，修辭句，非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞）得體性/語(yǔ)氣恰當(dāng) 1分語(yǔ)言地道 （不要說(shuō)chinglish，符合英語(yǔ)的思維和表達(dá)習(xí)慣）流利度完成規(guī)定字?jǐn)?shù) 3．寫(xiě)作規(guī)范，一般1，優(yōu)秀2.單詞拼寫(xiě)正確 表達(dá)符號(hào)正確 大小寫(xiě)正確 書(shū)寫(xiě)美觀/卷面整潔 常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤：三． 寫(xiě)作步驟三步走1. 寫(xiě)前a. 讀懂題目，明確題目的范圍和要求 （寫(xiě)得對(duì)）b. 依據(jù)題目的要點(diǎn)，放開(kāi)思路尋找所有可能有用的想法 （寫(xiě)得多）c. 在這些想法當(dāng)中找出最合適最合用的部分，組織文章的框架 （寫(xiě)得好）2. 寫(xiě)中重點(diǎn)解決語(yǔ)言問(wèn)題，嚴(yán)格按照提綱寫(xiě)！a. 關(guān)鍵句和銜接：中心句，主題句，段落之間和句子之間的銜接詞和銜接句b. 語(yǔ)言豐富程度：詞匯和句式不單調(diào)，多用近義詞或同義詞或反義詞，句式長(zhǎng)短結(jié)合，結(jié)構(gòu)豐富。b. 提出作文的標(biāo)題，有時(shí)會(huì)自擬。c. 文體恰當(dāng)3. 寫(xiě)后重點(diǎn)檢查兩個(gè)問(wèn)題：a. 文章的連貫b. 語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確與恰當(dāng)：語(yǔ)法，拼寫(xiě)，標(biāo)點(diǎn)，文體錯(cuò)誤等四． 結(jié)構(gòu)1. introduction paragraph (引言段)a. 第一部分：引言句：吸引讀者興趣b. 第二部分：話題句：引出文章話題c. 第三部分：中心句：表明寫(xiě)作目的或觀點(diǎn)或暗示正文結(jié)構(gòu)。一． 簡(jiǎn)介1. 題目構(gòu)成a. 通常用一句或若干句引出寫(xiě)作話題，然后對(duì)寫(xiě)作任務(wù)進(jìn)行限定，如提出要回答的問(wèn)題，說(shuō)明寫(xiě)作目的，讀者對(duì)象等。2. body paragraph （論證段、主體段）a. 分論點(diǎn)一 （要點(diǎn)一）：證據(jù)1， 證據(jù)2，證據(jù)3b. 分論點(diǎn)二 （要點(diǎn)二）：證據(jù)1，證據(jù)2， 證據(jù)3c. 分論點(diǎn)三 （要點(diǎn)三）：證據(jù)1， 證據(jù)2，證據(jù)33. concluding paragraph （結(jié)尾段）a. 總結(jié)文章要點(diǎn) (summary)b. 對(duì)該話題作最終評(píng)論 (final ment)以2005年和2002年真題為例：2005Interview is frequently used by employers as a means to recruit prospective employees. As a result, there have been many arguments for or against the interview as a selection procedure. What is your opinion? Write an essay of about 400 words to state your view. You should supply an appropriate title for your essay. 2002All of us would agree that in order to be successful in the presentday society, we university students have to possess certain personal qualities that can enable us to realize our aims. What do you think is the most important personal quality of a university student? Write a position of about 400 words on the following topic: The Most Important Personal Quality of A Univ
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