【正文】 第一句用 if 引導(dǎo)的條件句引出 “ 網(wǎng)絡(luò) ” 話題，第二句概述網(wǎng)絡(luò)帶給 多彩和便捷的生活。第三段，主要闡述學(xué)生怎樣增強防盜意識。第一段，主要概述 。20 篇 范文賞析 (一 ) View on Fake Commodities () 1. 假冒偽劣商品的危害。第二段，說明原因 ?！痉段摹? Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts? “If you don’t want to wake up and find you have no pants to wear, you’d better put them on in sleep,” goes a popular joke among students. Obviously, campus thefts have bee increasingly annoying as they occur far more often than before. And it seems that the thieves are less choosy these days, with their targets ranging widely from bikes, cell phones, purses, prepaid IC cards to sunglasses, bags, and even underwear. In short, anything that worth a dime is likely to be stolen. What makes students the easy targets? The reasons are not hard to find. But I believe of all these reasons, the lack of antitheft alertness is the most important. For lack of alertness, the students tend to leave the doors and windows wide open during sleep at noon or at night in summer. For the same reason, they’ll also leave their bikes unlocked before a store or by a road, or fet to take away their personal stuff before they go out of the classroom to make a phone call. These acts undoubtedly have increased their exposure to the lightfingered monsters. In order to minimize possible losses, the students must stay on guard in the first place, as awareness of the thefts around often makes a big difference. To be more specific, the students should not hide any tempting amount of cash in the dorm. Put it in the bank instead. Besides, do not leave any valuable items unattended. Take them wherever you go. In addition, it’s advisable to develop a neighbourhood watch programme with other students in the dorm and neighbouring dorms. ◇ 第一段思路點評： 陳述校園盜竊案件發(fā)生的情況 ◇ 語言點提示： it seems that 此句型表示一種可能性 ◇ 第二段思路點評： 說明被盜原因 ◇ 語言點提示： (1)What makes students the easy targets?此句引出下文 (2)antitheft alertness 防盜意識 (3)lack of alertness 缺乏警惕 (4)lightfingered 小偷小摸的、慣行扒竊的 ◇ 第三段思路點評： 闡述如何加強防盜意識 ◇ 語言點提示： 注意關(guān)聯(lián)詞語 in the first place， Besides， In addition 的使用可使行文更富邏輯性。 ◇ 語言點提示： has drawn?, realized, and provided 此為謂語連動式的運用。兩個長句足矣。第二段，主要分析校園物品被盜的原因。開篇綜述校園火災(zāi)頻發(fā)情形及造成的生命和財產(chǎn)損失，然后說明火災(zāi)原因，最后提出可能的火災(zāi)預(yù)防措施。 2. 怎樣杜絕假冒偽劣商品。第三段，詳細論述措施。 (三 )How Will Our Life Go on without Inter? 1. 網(wǎng)絡(luò)提供給了人們豐富多彩和便捷的生活 2. 很多人開始感覺離開網(wǎng)絡(luò)寸步難行 3. 你對網(wǎng)絡(luò)依賴癥的看法 ● 審題概述 ● 本文是一篇論述你對網(wǎng)絡(luò)與人們生活關(guān)系的文章。 ◇ 第二段思路點評： 詳述網(wǎng)絡(luò)與人們生活的緊密關(guān)系，先總述，后分述。 【范文】 1： How Will Our Life Go on without Inter?? If asked whether the Inter is the greatest discovery of the 20th century, my answer would be yes. The Inter has drawn the world closer together, realized countless incredible dreams, and p