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在寫作時,注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點分明,中心突出。全文可分兩大部分,第一部分寫中秋節(jié)的時間、傳統(tǒng)習俗及慶祝方式,第二部分寫我最期待的活動。在收尾部分表達了作者積極的人生態(tài)度,表示如果還有機會自己還樂于參與,這樣使得這篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整,表意更加清晰。【點睛】首先認真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點;然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達,例如save energy;brush our teeth;put it into different bins;take action;make a big difference。此處want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。周末你和父母商議后,打算邀請她去老舍茶館。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容確定主要句子的時態(tài),及句式等重要內(nèi)容。4.安全對每個人都很重要。在校老師工作認真負責,充滿愛心學生…… (至少發(fā)揮兩點)周末作業(yè)作業(yè)多.舍棄愛好其它活動鍛煉,電視愿望…… (發(fā)揮一到兩點)要求:1.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括以上表格提供的所有信息,并適當發(fā)揮:2.文章不少于90詞,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);3.語意通順,意思連貫,條理清楚,書寫規(guī)范;4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等信息。s all. Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如In order to,look back at,be going to,have a class meeting,say goodbye to,talk about,the dreams of,take some photos,in the end,each other,be late等。的有一個壞處。itthinksome________________一個例子。examplepointitstand的另一個原因。_______________________支持XX.are點睛:對立觀點式【英語】中考英語書面表達知識點題型經(jīng)典1一、中考英語書面表達(含答案詳細解析)1.近日,某中學 “iPad進課堂”的消息引起了學生和家長們的討論。in的第一個原因。onharmfuloutcantruththeInmight2.書面表達難忘的初中生活即將結(jié)束。而復(fù)雜單句結(jié)構(gòu)In order to keep the happy times in our hearts forever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week./ To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear , we are going to take some photos with our teachers and ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達多樣化,是本文的亮點。Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now. 【答案】Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us.As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can39。請根據(jù)以下信息內(nèi)容提示,寫一篇關(guān)于校園安全的英語小短文。寫作中注意語義通順,符合邏輯關(guān)系。你通過微信告知她:要去哪,在那要做什么以及何時何地見面。7.環(huán)境保護人人有責, 如果我們每一個人都能珍愛美麗地球 保護自然資源,相信我們的家園會越來越美好。以及狀語從句等;然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時可適當運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9.李華的英國筆友Jessica來信說, 她想了解中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。亮點說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達符合英語習慣,準確運用時態(tài),主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點詞句,如get together,enjoy the full moon, share our stories等。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。首先認真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點;然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點及每個