【正文】 現(xiàn)在完成時（have/has+done）。 3．學(xué)會理解和尊重清潔工人的勞動。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：e to an end結(jié)束；on the way在途中；get close to nature親近大自然；volunteer to do something自愿做某事；help sb to do sth幫助某人做某事；take part in sth參加活動。 寫作要求： 詞左右，開頭部分已給出，但不計入規(guī)定字?jǐn)?shù)。例文點(diǎn)評：例文采用的是一段式，人稱用的是第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)形式，時態(tài)主要用的是一般現(xiàn)在時，描述具體怎么做時，描寫細(xì)致，條理清晰。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form.、If people can39。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章整體意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。s obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people can39。文章條理清晰，有層次。題目中并沒有規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容，而是用圖表的形式，列出了寫作的提綱。最后要注意英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。短文以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了一些復(fù)合句和較高級的句型，如I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter ；From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter ；And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn 。注意英語句子的表達(dá)和漢語習(xí)慣是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，使用正確的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以及適當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型，保證句子的準(zhǔn)確性和語言的地道。4．假設(shè)你是來自中國的中學(xué)生李華,打算參加當(dāng)?shù)亟M織的國外冬令營,看完了這個網(wǎng)頁后,你打算給Liz Payne留言,表達(dá)你在冬令營期間想去London Canal Museum參觀的愿望。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore（而且）, we are accustomed to （習(xí)慣于）queuing up （排隊） for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。 I’m the mother of a fourteenyear –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 寫作要點(diǎn)：1. 表明自己的看法。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。Dear students , As we all know , hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years . That warns us of the serious airpollution____________________________________________________________________________　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　【答案】Dear students,As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air pollution. For example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides, the people39?！居⒄Z】中考英語書面表達(dá)練習(xí)題及答案一、英語書面表達(dá)1．近年來，各大城市霧霾（haze）情況越來越嚴(yán)重，整個國家的空氣污染狀況令人擔(dān)憂。s activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. What39。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。 2. 陳述自己的理由。開頭表明自己的看法，接下來陳述自己的理由，最后介紹自己的建議。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如make joint efforts，as junior students，for example，obey the traffic rules，run red light，in addition，no longer，in public，and so on，what39。內(nèi)容包括：；（包含冬令營的時間,聽Liz Payne的講座）；。另外還應(yīng)注意語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。整篇文章語句通順、意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型來表達(dá)，語法規(guī)范。通過審題可知，這篇短文我們應(yīng)從兩個方面來敘述：即應(yīng)該做什么；不應(yīng)該做什么。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，語言準(zhǔn)確，語句通順，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell phones. What39。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell 。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。；要點(diǎn)齊全；句子及篇章結(jié)構(gòu)正確、連貫；書寫規(guī)范。用了一些銜接詞besides等，句子過度自然。 不同意：1．很臟，容易使學(xué)生生病。（2）To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做義務(wù)勞動是他們學(xué)習(xí)如何做困難工作的好機(jī)會。亮點(diǎn)句型：（1）A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自從我們學(xué)校讓學(xué)生做自愿勞動以來，在學(xué)生中發(fā)生了一場激烈的爭論。 2．學(xué)生應(yīng)該學(xué)會做艱苦的工作。所寫的句子要符合英語語法，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。提示詞語：pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important提示問題：● What should you do in your daily life? ● Why do you do so? As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models.