【正文】 rsity students themselves should form good habits and healthy interests, take extracurricular activities positively and do exercises regularly.【點(diǎn)評(píng)】文章開門見上，指出大學(xué)生的不良生活方式，簡(jiǎn)單提及其危害。預(yù)測(cè)作文（二）Character Education1． 學(xué)校教育除了培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)能力之外，還應(yīng)注重諸如孝順、誠(chéng)實(shí)等的品德培養(yǎng)；2． 品德培養(yǎng)的重要性。第二段從幾個(gè)方面說明品德教育的重要性：滿足學(xué)生全面發(fā)展的需要；防止學(xué)生變得自私，自利，自負(fù)，沒有禮貌等等；教導(dǎo)學(xué)生對(duì)自己和祖國(guó)的將來負(fù)責(zé)。t change fate, but also the chances for poor ones to gain knowledge have phenomenon brings more harm than good to , it makes the richpoor divide ever widening, and sense of injustice ever , it may let many real potential genius go , it runs against the repeated call for building a peopleoriented, harmonious it needs to take urgent the part of government, it should increase its investments on education and urge all universities and colleges to make preferential policies for enrolling poor to colleges and universities, they should establish pleted systems for scholarship and fellowship in order to assist poor students.【點(diǎn)評(píng)】文章由習(xí)語“知識(shí)改變命運(yùn)”引出話題，指出當(dāng)今社會(huì)現(xiàn)實(shí)知識(shí)無法改變命運(yùn)?！?文章第二段中列舉該現(xiàn)象的危害，分別用 First,?Second,?Third表示“首先??其次??再次”。2． 你對(duì)此有什么看法？【范文】Confronting the more and more severe employment situation, university graduates have tried indirect employment for finding ways of getting good jobs, they try to gain social experience by doing internships or taking in some social am pletely in favor of taking indirect , it can not only relieve employment pressure, but also let students gain new knowledge and practical experience whichcan39。第一段中severe employment situation意為“嚴(yán)峻的就業(yè)形勢(shì)”；finding ways out意為“尋求出路”；第二段中in favor of 意為“支持”；not only?but also意為“不僅??而且??”；Last but not the least意為“最后但是最重要的是”。【范文】University education plays an important role in a person’s career since it offers people more the rising of university39。 doing parttime jobs will help them gain working experience, learn more of society as well as realize the importance of saving importantly, it helps to lighten financial burdens of parents.【點(diǎn)評(píng)】文章第一段開門見山，指出關(guān)于誰支付大學(xué)學(xué)費(fèi)的不同意見。 s ability意為“超出某人的能力范圍”。 economic burdens, especially to those from poor all these new jobs meet the real demands of modern times, they can ensure college students to keep pace with the times and get selfimprovements according to the needs of 39。第三段分析了新型兼職工作的特征“形式新穎，風(fēng)格各異，自由靈活”，提倡學(xué)生合理安排學(xué)業(yè)與工作?！痉段摹緾ollege Student Cadres are those ones who usually do excellent jobs in academics and make outstanding performance in manners influence the students around them , due to the close relationship between college and society, many college student cadres gradually show undesirable tendency towards mistakenly regard their duties as strange phenomenon not only reveals the immature of young adults, but also discloses that those cadres haven’t realized the nature of Students’ following factors can account for , selfcultivation of college student cadres is not good they lack social experience, they make mistakes easily with the desires for quick , the checkup systems in colleges overemphasize their performance in Students’ Union, so student cadres only focus on pursuits of outstanding things considered, universities should reinforce guidance and education for college student cadres and help them build up a stronger sense of services.【點(diǎn)評(píng)】大學(xué)生干部曾經(jīng)是一個(gè)時(shí)代活力動(dòng)力、正氣朝氣、理想希望的象征。最后一段呼吁學(xué)校加強(qiáng)對(duì)大學(xué)生干部的引導(dǎo)，幫助其樹立正確的信念和服務(wù)意識(shí)。 attentionfrom their studies, as well as make a great deal of hustle and bustle in the initially peaceful importantly, it may cause unnecessary troubles for a result, it is beneficial to limit tourists so as to guarantee students39。第二段中holy palaces表示“神圣的殿堂”； hustle and bustle表示“喧鬧繁雜”；guarantee students39。【范文】In recent years, many college students face a big problem about whether they should gain a job first before choosing the most appropriate one, or they should hold a clear job orientation in their mind from the very beginning ?As far as I am concerned, each choice has its own a job without interestshelps college students gain enough time to find a better one while adjusting themselves into the real the contrary, choosing a relevant job can avoid blindness employments and save students’ time for striving for their pletely agree that college students should make out plans for their career and be downto–earth in carrying out confronted with the increasing difficulty of getting a job, they should not merely aim at material gains.【點(diǎn)評(píng)】本題談?wù)摰氖且环N社會(huì)現(xiàn)象。文章第一段中 from the very beginning表示“從最開始”。 psychological problems have bee the primary cause of “extreme behaviours”.It is vital to take effective actions against psychological problems, especially to those ones without any apparent the first place, the authorities concerned should let students be aware of the utmost significance of mental on psychological health should be frequently given and psychological clinics should be set up to provide troubled students with timely the second place, students should keep optimistic in their daily life and let their channel of munication open to their teachers and in case of mental illness, they should not hesitate to go to psychological counselors for with these measures taken can we expect sound growth of students.【點(diǎn)評(píng)】文章首段指出如今大學(xué)生受到各種壓力，從而產(chǎn)生了各樣的心理問題，同時(shí)提出有必要采取措施解決大學(xué)生的心理問題；第二段結(jié)合作者自己的觀點(diǎn)提出如何對(duì)大學(xué)生進(jìn)行心理干預(yù)：首先相關(guān)部門應(yīng)對(duì)大學(xué)生心理問題引起重視，采取講座和心理咨詢的方式給學(xué)生及時(shí)提供幫助；其次，大學(xué)生應(yīng)該保持樂觀的態(tài)度，如遇心理問題，應(yīng)毫不猶豫尋求心理咨詢師的幫助。第五篇：四級(jí)作文現(xiàn)象類In recent years,the problem of......has bee increasingly serious,which has aroused the concern from the whole society+(1~2句)Several factors can account for this problem/ of all.......Moreover...In addition...Consequently,It is 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