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ery ordinary he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his goodpersonalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a devotes all himself to our we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his spite of all this, father never plains to is his full devotion that we39。m pursuing further studies at college far away from miss him very I often see him in my great image is deeply carved in my :本文作者以樸實的語言充滿感情地刻畫了父親的不平凡的形象,分別從四個不同的角度描述了父親的勤勞、奉獻、關(guān)愛和樂觀。作者沒有運用太多復(fù)雜的句式,但能適當(dāng)運用介詞短語、分詞結(jié)構(gòu)、強調(diào)及重復(fù)的手法,恰到好處 地突出了行文句式的變化,使文章更耐讀。d have stayed mother remarried shortly thereafter, and this man was my dad until I was called him Dad and used his name all through , when he and my mother divorced, he just walked again, I wondered what was wrong with me that I couldn39。ve learned about 39。t remember it until was too late to post a card to I decided to buy I was in the department store I found it was not easy for me to choose something right for I got an ran home and opened my made a beautiful card and mailed him through the I began to make father came home, he was very glad to find a big meal on the I asked him to check his was amazed to find a beautiful card in his a wonderful surprise!