【正文】 e production of Othello, Frank Finlay played Iago and was well suited to the role. 簡練的表達(dá)a. As I had nothing to do, I decided to take a morning walk. So I went to the park.b. As I had nothing to do, I decided to take a walk to the park.a. As far as my ideal job is concerned, I think I want to be an interpreter in the future.b. As far as my ideal job is concerned, I want to be an interpreter.a. Some want to be doctors, some want to be teachers, some want to be engineers, and so on.b. Some want to be doctors, some want to be teachers, and some want to be engineers.a. These fake modities’ quality is always very poor. They may cause a great loss to the consumers, or even the life.b. As the quality of the fake modities is always very poor, they may cause great damage to the consumers, or even endanger their lives.E. 斷裂句a. Some persons thought the law is no good. Because they think setting off firecrackers is a beneficial thing.b. Some persons think the law is no good because they regard setting off firecrackers as a beneficial thing.a. However there are still a number of people who enjoy seeing films. Because the visual and audio effects of films are much better.b. However there are still a number of people who enjoy seeing films, because the visual and audio effects of films are much better.a. Almost everyone of us has bought some fake modities. For instance, fake shoes, fake bags, and the worst thing——fake medicine.b. Almost everyone of us has had the experience of buying fake modities, for instance, fake shoes, fake bags and, worst of all, fake medicines.F. 標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯誤amp。不可數(shù)名詞a. Even a lot of entertainment such as TV, recording and films need electricity.b. Even a lot of entertainment such as TV, recordings and films need electricity.a. Two solutions have been remended so far, and each one has both advantage and disadvantage.b. Two solutions have been remended so far, and each one has both advantages and disadvantages.a. As long as we don’t give up and believe in ourselves, and in the meantime learn something from failure, we’ll certainly make our marks in the end.b. As long as we don’t give up keeping believing in ourselves, and in the meantime learn something from failure, we’ll certainly make our mark in the end.a. With money we can travel widely and have more experience.b. With money we can travel widely and have more experiences.a. The fresh air and beautiful sceneries will attract people to leave the overcrowded city.b. The fresh air and beautiful scenery will attract people to leave the overcrowded city.a. For example, setting off firecrackers often sets fire to buildings, and causes many damages.b. For example, setting off firecrackers often sets fire to buildings, and causes a lot of damage.a. Even a lot of entertainments such as TV, recordings and films need electricity.b. Even a lot of entertainment such as TV, recordings and films need electricity.a. A great deal of new subjects, which are actually derived from both natural and social science, has e into existence and enrich the sea of human knowledge greatly.b. A great number of new subjects, which are actually derived from both natural and social science, has e into existence and enriched the sea of human knowledge greatly.用詞不當(dāng)a. For example, in reporting, a reporter can use it (tape recorder) instead of the old means of writing them on a notebook.b. For example, a reporter can use it in interviews instead of the old means of writing them on a notebook.a. With more and more people ing into this world, human beings are now in danger of food shortage because the land on which man can grow rice remains the same.b. With more and more people ing into this world, human beings are now in danger of food shortage because the amount of land on which man can grow food crops remains the same.a. It can lessen the crowding degree of streets and speed up the flow of traffic.b. b. It can lessen the crowdedness of streets and speed up the flow of traffic.a. In the meantime, the grain requirement in people’s diet consequently kept dropping.b. In the meantime, the grain consumption in people’s diet consequently kept dropping.a. With the development of the standard of living, people now can afford to buy more milk and meat than before.b. With the improvement of the standard of living, people now can afford to buy more milk and meat than before.a. They will push our society to a higher position.b. They will push our society to a higher level of development.a. Now, when a person is hunting for a job, there will always be a job interview.b. Today when a person is hunting for a job, there are almost always job interviews.a. In contrast, still a few of civilians expect the government to call off this regulation.b. However, there are still a few citizens who expect the government to call off this ban.a. You should practice under the direction of a teacher.b. You should be trained under the direction of an instructor.名詞的并