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【正文】 大家說說這個問題。：Science and technology have greatly influenced our lives and our society is changing very rapidly.修改后：Science and technology have e to pervade every aspect of our lives and, as a result, society is changing at a speed which is quite unprecedented.解析：經(jīng)過第一題的分析，大家應(yīng)該也了解了“greatly”，“rapidly”屬于常用詞，表示程度高、速度快，這樣的詞在表達(dá)效果上不夠具體，缺乏說服力，就像大家看文章當(dāng)然希望能看到的是實(shí)實(shí)在在的干貨啊。原句用mon表達(dá)實(shí)際的現(xiàn)實(shí)生活的枯燥無味是不準(zhǔn)確的，mon的意思是“普通的，平常的”，普通平常的東西不一定是枯燥的，tedious是表示“(因過長、過慢或單調(diào))令人厭倦的，煩人的”，恰好傳達(dá)出現(xiàn)實(shí)生活由于瑣碎和重復(fù)而變得索然無味這種含義。類似表達(dá)“提出觀點(diǎn)”的句子還有：I hold a point of view that…I hold the opinion that…：We know that sometimes success is measured by how much money you earn.修改后：It does not surprise us to discover that sometimes success is measured in terms of the money you earn.解析：如上句的“believe”一樣，“know”也是非常初級的詞匯，作文中出現(xiàn)“I believe that…，I know that…”這樣的表達(dá)只能體現(xiàn)考生寫作技巧的稚嫩，用“It does not surprise us to discover that…”替換“We know that…”并沒有改變原句的含義，卻使全句頓時增添了亮點(diǎn)。significantly還可以替換成considerably，tremendously等，同樣具有不錯的表達(dá)效果。什么是奮斗？奮斗就是每天很難，可一年一年卻越
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