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policeranpolice uniformsknifeminibususe some transitional words Help Millie plete her story Justin and Luke tried to open the back door of the minibus with use a knife to open the back door of the minibus.use different expressions(表達(dá)方式多樣 )What do you think will happen to the twins?Group work The structure of this article3 paragraphs Para 1Para 2Para 3backgrounddevelopmentresult添枝加葉Try to make your writing more beautiful.一、表達(dá)方式多樣 (use different expressions)二、巧用連詞原則 (Proper conjunctions)三、主題句原則 (Topic sentences)Background?the Chen family?they live in a flat .?their father was at work.?mother went to the supermarket.?two children ,Nancy and Victor, were at home.? the two children disagree all the time.?the two children argued about what TV programmes to watch?they got angry with each other.?Victor tried to throw the remote control onto the table ?the remote control fell onto Nancy’s foot.StoryWriting time3 parts Para 1 backgroundPara 2 developmentPara 3 resultEvaluation time (評(píng)價(jià)時(shí)間 )1. Selfediting: (自我修改 ) Check your reports by yourselves, find out the mistakes and try to correct.評(píng)價(jià)標(biāo)準(zhǔn): 段落分明,要點(diǎn)齊全,時(shí)態(tài)恰當(dāng),結(jié)構(gòu)正確, 句式多樣,過(guò)渡自然,觀點(diǎn)合理,書寫規(guī)范。The more you practice, the better your writing will be!