雅思寫(xiě)作－小作文范文－線(xiàn)圖-預(yù)覽頁(yè)
【正文】 1979 and 2020. ? 經(jīng)典的題目改寫(xiě)，上次談到的是將題目的名詞詞組改寫(xiě)成從句，而這句就不同了，改寫(xiě)后仍舊是名詞詞組，讓我們來(lái)一起看看，本段添加了 change in the amount of, 任何信息均談的是 “變化情況 ”， consumption of sth 改寫(xiě)成 sth consumed, consumption [u], consumed為過(guò)去分詞作后置定語(yǔ) 主體一段 In 1979 beef was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week. ? 本段都是說(shuō)明起點(diǎn)的情況，先說(shuō)牛排的情況，說(shuō)明了兩點(diǎn)，消耗量和受歡迎的程度。線(xiàn)圖 C5T1 原題 The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make parisons where relevant. The graph shows the increase in the ageing population in Japan, Sweden and the USA. It indicates that the percentage of elderly people in all three countries is expected to increase to almost 25% of the respective populations by the year 2040. In 1940 the proportion of people aged 65 or more stood at only 5% in Japan, approximately 7% in Sweden and 9% in the US. However, while the figures for the Western countries grew to about 15% in around 1990, the figure for Japan dipped to only % for much of this period, before rising to almost 5% again at the present time. In spite of some fluctuation in the expected percentages, the proportion of older people will probably continue to increase in the next two decades in the three countries. A more dramatic rise is predicted between 2030 and 2040 in Japan, by which time it is thought that the proportion of elderly people will be similar in the three countries. 分析 ： 題目 The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. 第一段 The graph shows the increase in the ageing population in Japan, Sweden and the USA. ? 作者沒(méi)有一上來(lái)提示圖表內(nèi)容，而是直接奔向中心思想，也就是文章的主旨句 。 Water used in the industrial and domestic sectors also increased, but consumption was minimal until midcentury. ? 說(shuō)明工業(yè)和家庭用水的特征，而且也把兩點(diǎn)說(shuō)明了，從時(shí)間變化來(lái)看， increase。 ? 超越 overtake 注意 修飾數(shù)字 的詞 ? about 225 grams, approximately 100 grams, almost 250 grams ? just over 50 grams , just below grams 本文的主題就是消耗，和 B6T1一樣，也存在 消耗 的多樣表達(dá) ? 225 grams consumed, consumed過(guò)去分詞作后置定語(yǔ) ? lamb and chicken were eaten, eat的被動(dòng)式作謂語(yǔ) ? fish was consumed, consume的被動(dòng)式作謂語(yǔ) ? the consumption of beef and lamb, consumption名詞
公司管理相關(guān)推薦
鄂ICP備17016276號(hào)-1